News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议加强语法基础，尤其是动词时态和单复数形式的正确使用。同时，回答应更简洁明了，避免冗余和不相关内容。

例: Yes, I am interested in news, especially international news about the arts because I enjoy oil painting and like to learn about art studies.

提案: 回答表达混乱，语法错误较多，建议练习正确的句子结构和时态使用。回答应直接回答问题，避免无关内容。

例: I usually find news on my computer during my break time, and sometimes I watch news on television at home.

提案: 回答中语法和表达不流畅，建议加强句子连贯性和语法准确性。回答应更清晰地表达观点，并使用连接词使内容连贯。

例: I have never thought about being a journalist before, but if I had the chance, I would like to work in another country because I could learn more about different cultures and improve my communication skills.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰，建议练习正确的时态和句子结构。回答应更连贯，避免断句和不完整的表达。

例: Yes, I read some news this morning on the news app on my iPhone. I have a habit of reading news every day to learn new information from other countries, especially about the arts.

提案: 回答表达不够流畅，语法错误较多。建议加强句子结构和词汇使用，确保表达清晰且连贯。

例: Yes, sometimes I like to talk about news with my friends, especially important international news or significant changes in our lives. For example, when there is bad weather reported, I discuss it with them.

× Yes, I interested in the news.

✓ Yes, I am interested in the news.

这里缺少be动词，正确的现在时态表达应该是“I am interested”，表示现在的状态。

× Not only our countries in the US, but also the international informations, especially the news about the arts, because I like oil painting and I have audio study or are you painting studioso I petition about other news.

✓ Not only our country, the US, but also international information, especially news about the arts, because I like oil painting and I have audio study or art painting studies. I am interested in other news.

information是不可数名词，不用复数形式informations；countries应为country，因为指的是单一国家美国；句子结构混乱，需调整以表达清晰。

× Are you already found any other from the television and FRITREAR at home or sometimes are during my office.

✓ Have you already found any news from the television and FRITREAR at home or sometimes during my office?

这里应使用现在完成时“Have you found”，表示从过去到现在的经历；另外句子结构不完整，需调整。

× I like use my computer.

✓ I like using my computer.

动词like后面应接动名词形式using，而不是动词原形use。

× I like during my break time to browsing some news from my computer screen.

✓ I like during my break time to browse some news on my computer screen.

动词to后应接动词原形browse，而不是现在分词browsing；另外介词on更适合描述屏幕上的内容。

× if I have a chance to be a journalist I want I would like working in other country.

✓ If I have a chance to be a journalist, I would like to work in another country.

表达愿望时用would like加动词不定式to work；另外“other country”应为“another country”。

× Be 'cause I I could learn more about other countries traditionally in the practice my communications committee.

✓ Because I could learn more about other countries, especially in practicing my communication skills.

介词使用错误，应该用in practicing；句子结构混乱，需调整以表达清晰。

× Oh yeah, I read a little bit just to the browsing from the news apps in my iPhone.

✓ Oh yeah, I read a little bit just by browsing the news apps on my iPhone.

这里应使用现在分词browsing表示方式；介词用by表示方式；on my iPhone更合适。

× I have a habit to read the news every day and to learn some new messages from other countries.

✓ I have a habit of reading the news every day and learning some new information from other countries.

习惯表达为have a habit of + 动名词；messages用information更合适。

× Will be giving more idea.

✓ It will give me more ideas.

缺少主语，且表达不完整，需补充主语和动词形式。

× Yeah, sometimes I like to talk about a news, especially there is.

✓ Yeah, sometimes I like to talk about news, especially when there is

news是不可数名词，不用冠词a；句子不完整，需补充。

× Important the news in the international or or crucial change in my in our life.

✓ important news internationally or crucial changes in our lives.

形容词和名词顺序错误，internationally用作副词修饰important news；life应为复数lives。

× For example, the News reported bad weather.

✓ For example, the news reported bad weather.

news是不可数名词，不用大写；句子结构正确但需注意大小写。

× I want to talk about it with data.

✓ I want to talk about it with my friends.

这里的data不合适，应该是指和朋友讨论，需更换为friends。