News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，避免冗余，直接回答问题并简洁说明原因。

例: Yes, I am interested in news because it helps me stay informed about current events and improve my knowledge.

提案: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议直接说明获取新闻的方式，并使用连词使句子连贯。

例: I usually check news apps on my phone once or twice a week to see the latest updates.

提案: 回答语法错误较多且表达混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并给出具体原因。

例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because I find writing reports challenging and it requires skills I haven't mastered yet.

提案: 回答内容不够具体且有语法错误。建议清晰描述新闻内容，避免无关信息，并使用连词使句子流畅。

例: This morning, I read news about electric buses in China. They save energy and reduce pollution, which is good for the environment.

提案: 回答表达不清且语法错误严重。建议简洁回答并具体说明谈论新闻的内容和意义。

例: Yes, I often discuss political and community news with my friends because it helps us understand important issues and share opinions.

× Yes, I'm quite interesting in finding some news today and to see what happened now days and to find you freely to improve our work.

✓ Yes, I'm quite interested in finding some news today and seeing what has happened nowadays and to find you freely to improve our work.

这里的错误是将形容词interesting错误地用作描述自己的状态，正确的形容词应该是interested，表示“感兴趣的”。此外，'now days'应写为'nowadays'，表示“现在”。建议用interested替换interesting。

× Yes, I'm quite interesting in finding some news today and to see what happened now days and to find you freely to improve our work.

✓ Yes, I'm quite interested in finding some news today and seeing what has happened nowadays and to find you freely to improve our work.

短语中应使用介词'in'搭配interested，表示“对……感兴趣”，而不是interesting后面接in。

× Yes, I'm quite interesting in finding some news today and to see what happened now days and to find you freely to improve our work.

✓ Yes, I'm quite interested in finding some news today and seeing what has happened nowadays and to find you freely to improve our work.

在并列动词结构中，保持形式一致，使用动名词形式seeing而不是to see。

× Maybe one or two days a week I will take some time to. Refer to my app on my phone and to say what happened nowadays.

✓ Maybe one or two days a week I will take some time to refer to my app on my phone and see what has happened nowadays.

动词refer后不需要大写，且不应有句号。'to say'应改为'see'以符合语境。

× Maybe one or two days a week I will take some time to. Refer to my app on my phone and to say what happened nowadays.

✓ Maybe one or two days a week I will take some time to refer to my app on my phone and see what has happened nowadays.

在动词不定式to后，后续动词应保持不定式形式，且并列动词应保持一致。

× Actually, no, because I thought I'm not good enough to become a journalist because I can't to write the report otherwise reviews as process as possible because I thought it's quite difficult work. OK.

✓ Actually, no, because I think I'm not good enough to become a journalist because I can't write the report or review as properly as possible because I think it's quite difficult work. OK.

不能在情态动词can't后加to，正确结构是can't write。

× Actually, no, because I thought I'm not good enough to become a journalist because I can't to write the report otherwise reviews as process as possible because I thought it's quite difficult work. OK.

✓ Actually, no, because I think I'm not good enough to become a journalist because I can't write the report or review as properly as possible because I think it's quite difficult work. OK.

时态应保持一致，表达现在的想法应使用现在时think，而非过去时thought。

× Today morning I read some news about bus in China.

✓ This morning I read some news about buses in China.

时间表达应为'this morning'，表示今天早上。

× Today morning I read some news about bus in China.

✓ This morning I read some news about buses in China.

bus应使用复数buses，表示多辆公交车。

× We have the electric bars in nowadays roads because the electric bus can save some energy and make some coding class for people.

✓ We have electric buses on nowadays roads because the electric bus can save some energy and provide some coding classes for people.

bars应为buses，表示公交车；'in nowadays roads'应改为'on nowadays roads'，介词使用错误。

× We have the electric bars in nowadays roads because the electric bus can save some energy and make some coding class for people.

✓ We have electric buses on nowadays roads because the electric bus can save some energy and provide some coding classes for people.

介词'in'用于地点时不合适，应使用'on'表示“在……路上”。

× We have the electric bars in nowadays roads because the electric bus can save some energy and make some coding class for people.

✓ We have electric buses on nowadays roads because the electric bus can save some energy and provide some coding classes for people.

coding class应为coding classes，表示多个课程。

× So I thought it's good news for us to take a bus to somewhere.

✓ So I thought it's good news for us to take a bus somewhere.

'to somewhere'中to多余，somewhere本身已表示方向。

× Yes, of course I talk some news about the political or about the.

✓ Yes, of course I talk about some news about politics or about the community.

动词talk后应加介词about，表示“谈论”。

× Yes, of course I talk some news about the political or about the.

✓ Yes, of course I talk about some news about politics or about the community.

political应改为politics，表示“政治”名词。

× Community for some other ones that use defy.

✓ Community and some other topics that affect our lives.

原句结构混乱，缺少谓语和连词，导致句意不明。建议重构句子使其完整。

× Our life will be changed and I thought it's very good activities to talk with our people to find what's our lack of.

✓ Our lives will be changed and I think it's a very good activity to talk with people to find what we lack.

life应为复数lives，activities应为单数activity，且代词使用不当，'our people'改为'people'更自然。