News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“helps me more understanding”应为“helps me understand”，且表达略显重复。建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时注意语法准确性。

例: Yes, I watch the news occasionally because it helps me understand the world better and keeps me informed about current events.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇“my my”，且表达不够流畅。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并且补充一些细节使回答更具体。

例: I usually get news on my mobile phone through apps like Sina News and Yahoo, which is very convenient for me.

提案: 句子结构混乱，语法错误较多，如“help the people touching with many kinds of people as”表达不清。建议简化句子，明确表达原因，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I wanted to be a journalist when I was a child because it seemed like an interesting job that allows you to meet many different people.

提案: 表达较自然，但“prefer catch on the news evening”语法不正确，应为“prefer to catch up on the news in the evening”。建议注意动词搭配和时态使用。

例: Honestly, I usually sleep until the afternoon, so I prefer to catch up on the news in the evening before I go to bed. It helps me relax and fall asleep faster.

提案: 回答内容较完整，但“talk the news”应为“talk about the news”，“the last news”表达不够准确，建议使用“latest news”。建议注意介词使用和词汇准确性。

例: Yes, I often talk about the news with my friend Mr. Lee. We usually discuss the latest news, especially topics related to technology and real estate because these fields are constantly changing.

× Yes, I watch news every once in a while because it helps me more understanding this world and what's going on the world.

✓ Yes, I watch news every once in a while because it helps me understand this world and what's going on in the world.

这里“helps me more understanding”中的“understanding”用法错误，应该用动词原形“understand”，因为动词help后面接动词时用原形。

× Yes, I watch news every once in a while because it helps me more understanding this world and what's going on the world.

✓ Yes, I watch news every once in a while because it helps me understand this world and what's going on in the world.

短语“what's going on the world”缺少介词“in”，正确表达是“what's going on in the world”，表示“世界上正在发生的事情”。

× I usually watch news on my my mobile phones such as Sina News app, Yahoo and even some education videos.

✓ I usually watch news on my mobile phone such as Sina News app, Yahoo and even some educational videos.

“mobile phones”应为单数“mobile phone”，因为通常指个人使用的手机。

× I usually watch news on my my mobile phones such as Sina News app, Yahoo and even some education videos.

✓ I usually watch news on my mobile phone such as Sina News app, Yahoo and even some educational videos.

“education videos”应改为“educational videos”，因为这里需要形容词形式来修饰“videos”。

× Yes, when I was a kid I wanted to be a journalist because I saw it was an interesting job that help the people touching with many kinds of people as.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I wanted to be a journalist because I saw it was an interesting job that helps people get in touch with many kinds of people.

“help”应为第三人称单数“helps”，因为主语是单数“job”。“touching with”用法错误，正确表达是“get in touch with”，表示“联系”。

× Yes, when I was a kid I wanted to be a journalist because I saw it was an interesting job that help the people touching with many kinds of people as.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I wanted to be a journalist because I saw it was an interesting job that helps people get in touch with many kinds of people.

主语“job”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“helps”。

× Yes, when I was a kid I wanted to be a journalist because I saw it was an interesting job that help the people touching with many kinds of people as.

✓ Yes, when I was a kid I wanted to be a journalist because I saw it was an interesting job that helps people get in touch with many kinds of people.

“touching with”是不正确的搭配，正确表达是“get in touch with”，表示“与……联系”。

× Honestly, I usually sleep until the afternoon so I prefer catch on the news evening before I go to bed.

✓ Honestly, I usually sleep until the afternoon so I prefer to catch up on the news in the evening before I go to bed.

“prefer”后面应接不定式“to catch up”，且“catch on the news”应为“catch up on the news”，表示“赶上新闻”。

× Honestly, I usually sleep until the afternoon so I prefer catch on the news evening before I go to bed.

✓ Honestly, I usually sleep until the afternoon so I prefer to catch up on the news in the evening before I go to bed.

“evening”前应加介词“in”，表示“在晚上”。

× Yes, I often talk the news with my friend Mr. Lee.

✓ Yes, I often talk about the news with my friend Mr. Lee.

动词“talk”后应加介词“about”表示“谈论”，缺少介词导致表达不完整。

× Yes, I often talk the news with my friend Mr. Lee.

✓ Yes, I often talk about the news with my friend Mr. Lee.

“friend”前应加冠词“my”，且“friend”单数形式正确。