News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有重复和冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意动词形式和搭配，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I am very interested in news because it helps me understand society and education better. I usually pay close attention to current events.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，表达不够连贯，且未使用连接词。建议避免重复，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并且注意表达的准确性。

例: I usually find news online because it's convenient to search for information on my phone. However, sometimes the information may not be reliable.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误和不自然的用法，如“my child's dream”应为“my childhood dream”，且句子较长且缺少连接词。建议使用正确表达并合理分句。

例: Yes, I would like to be a journalist in the future because it has been my childhood dream. I think it's exciting and I want to help more people learn about the world.

提案: 回答较为自然，但“in the morning today”表达不够地道，且句子结构可以更简洁。建议使用更自然的时间表达方式。

例: Actually, I haven't read the news this morning because I have been preparing for my exam recently.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“talk some interesting news”应为“talk about some interesting news”，且表达重复。建议注意介词使用和避免重复。

例: Yes, I often talk about interesting news with my friends because it's meaningful. Sometimes, we share the same opinions.

× I really interested and focus the news.

✓ I am really interested in and focus on the news.

这里缺少动词be动词，且动词interested后应加介词in，focus后应加介词on，表示对新闻感兴趣并关注新闻。

× I really interested and focus the news.

✓ I am really interested in and focus on the news.

动词interested后应接介词in，focus后应接介词on，表示对某事感兴趣和关注。

× Actually, actually I usually find some News Online because it is convenient for me to search information on my phone and sometimes it is not reliable there.

✓ Actually, I usually find some news online because it is convenient for me to search for information on my phone, but sometimes it is not reliable.

动词search后应加介词for，表示“搜索某物”；句子中连接词使用不当，改为but更合适。

× Actually, actually I usually find some News Online because it is convenient for me to search information on my phone and sometimes it is not reliable there.

✓ Actually, I usually find some news online because it is convenient for me to search for information on my phone, but sometimes it is not reliable.

news是不可数名词，不用大写且不加复数形式。

× Actually I want to be a journalist in my future time because it's my child's dream and I think it's cool to be a journalist and I also want to more people to learn about the world.

✓ Actually, I want to be a journalist in the future because it's my childhood dream, and I think it's cool to be a journalist. I also want more people to learn about the world.

短语in my future time不自然，改为in the future；child's dream应为childhood dream，表示童年梦想；want后直接接动词不定式，不加to。

× Actually I want to be a journalist in my future time because it's my child's dream and I think it's cool to be a journalist and I also want to more people to learn about the world.

✓ Actually, I want to be a journalist in the future because it's my childhood dream, and I think it's cool to be a journalist. I also want more people to learn about the world.

want后应直接接动词不定式，不能加to；child's dream应为childhood dream，表示童年梦想。

× Actually I'm preparing my exam recently so I haven't read the news in the morning today.

✓ Actually, I've been preparing for my exam recently, so I haven't read the news this morning.

recently表示最近，常用现在完成时或现在完成进行时；prepare后应加介词for；today morning不自然，改为this morning。

× Actually I'm preparing my exam recently so I haven't read the news in the morning today.

✓ Actually, I've been preparing for my exam recently, so I haven't read the news this morning.

prepare后应加介词for，表示“为考试准备”；时间状语顺序应为this morning。

× I usually talk some interesting news with my friends.

✓ I usually talk about some interesting news with my friends.

talk后应加介词about，表示“谈论”；news是不可数名词，不能用some修饰具体新闻条目，但口语中可接受。

× I usually talk some interesting news with my friends.

✓ I usually talk about some interesting news with my friends.

动词talk后应加介词about，表示谈论某事。