News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免句子不完整和语法错误，保持语言自然流畅。可以直接表达观点，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I am interested in news, especially about celebrities because I find their lives fascinating. However, I am less interested in political news as it can be complicated and sometimes boring.

提案: 回答较好，但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇，使表达更自然且信息更具体。

例: I usually find news through a news app on my phone. Every morning, I check it to stay updated with current events, which helps me understand what's happening around the world.

提案: 回答不完整且语法错误较多。应直接回答问题，避免重复，补充具体原因，并保持句子完整。

例: No, I would not like to be a journalist because it requires strong communication skills and quick thinking, which I feel I lack. Instead, my dream is to become a teacher.

提案: 注意时态和语法的正确使用，避免口语化的填充词，回答应更简洁且连贯。

例: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I overslept. However, I did read some news yesterday to stay informed.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，应简洁明了地表达观点，并使用恰当的词汇和连接词。

例: Yes, I often talk with my friends about news, especially about celebrities. We enjoy discussing their lives and recent events related to singers or dancers.

× I tend to enjoy a reading or watching the news.

✓ I tend to enjoy reading or watching the news.

动词后面不需要加冠词'a'，且动词' enjoy'后应直接接动名词形式，故应为'reading'而非'a reading'。

× But if we're talking about political news, then.

✓ But if we're talking about political news, then I don't really enjoy it.

句子不完整，缺少谓语部分，导致表达不清，应补充完整句子。

× which helps me keep updated with the world.

✓ which helps me keep updated on the world.

短语'keep updated'后应接介词'on'表示对某事保持更新，'with'用法不当。

× No, I don't think I'm a good type for being a journalist in the future.

✓ No, I don't think I'm the right type to be a journalist in the future.

'a good type for being'表达不自然，且'good type'搭配不当，应改为'the right type to be'。

× Being a journalist requires certain qualities, which I think I don't have that qualities.

✓ Being a journalist requires certain qualities, which I think I don't have.

'that qualities'用法错误，'qualities'前不应加'that'，且句尾重复，删去更通顺。

× Also, I'm always My dream is to become.

✓ Also, my dream is to become a journalist.

句子结构混乱，缺少谓语，需重组句子使其完整。

× No, this morning I just catched up on my sleep, which made me forgot to read the latest news.

✓ No, this morning I just caught up on my sleep, which made me forget to read the latest news.

'catched'是错误的过去式，正确为'caught'；'forgot'应为动词原形'forget'，因前面有助动词'made'。

× Uh, however, I read some news yesterday.

✓ Uh, however, I read some news yesterday.

此句中'read'发音为过去式，书写正确，无需修改。

× Yes, since with all of my friends, uh, it's always curious about the celebrities and their lives.

✓ Yes, since all of my friends are always curious about celebrities and their lives.

'since with all of my friends'结构不正确，应改为'since all of my friends are'；'it's always curious'主语错误，应为'friends'。

× So we often talked about the the news related to celebrities such as singer or dancer things like.

✓ So we often talk about the news related to celebrities such as singers or dancers and things like that.

'talked'与频率副词'often'搭配时应使用一般现在时'talk'；'singer or dancer'应为复数形式；句尾表达不完整，需补充。