News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够连贯，句子结构不完整，且存在语法错误。建议使用完整句子表达观点，避免重复和语法错误，并且用连接词使表达更自然。

例: No, I am not interested in news because there are more and more negative stories nowadays, which makes me feel helpless and depressed.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议使用完整句子，正确使用时态和连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: I usually come across news on social media, although I don't search for it specifically. However, seeing negative news often makes me unhappy.

提案: 回答结构较好，但表达略显重复。建议使用更丰富的词汇和连接词，使表达更自然且有逻辑。

例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because many journalists in my country are not responsible, which makes it difficult to improve the situation.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题。建议使用完整句子，避免断句，表达更清晰。

例: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I was preparing for this test and didn't have time. Reading news would have distracted me.

提案: 回答中表达不够准确，语法和用词有误。建议使用更准确的词汇和完整句子，增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I often talk with my friends about the news, and we feel disappointed about the poor conditions some women face. We also feel helpless because we cannot do much to help them.

× Is there are more and more negative news nowadays?

✓ Are there more and more negative news nowadays?

句子中存在多余的助动词“are”，正确的疑问句结构应该是“Are there...?”，表示“是否有...”。这里是存在句型错误，应该去掉多余的“are”。

× But I will saw them.

✓ But I will see them.

“will”后面应该接动词原形，不能用过去式“saw”，正确用法是“will see”，表示将来时。

× That's really. Distract me.

✓ That really distracts me.

原句中“That's really. Distract me.”断句错误且动词形式不正确。应合并为一句，主语是“That”，动词用第三人称单数形式“distracts”，表示“那真的让我分心”。

× because of the poor condition of some female.

✓ because of the poor condition of some females.

“female”作为名词时，复数形式是“females”，表示多个女性。这里指的是一些女性，应该用复数形式。