News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答有些重复，语言不够流畅。建议减少重复词汇，使用更自然的表达方式，并且尽量简洁明了地回答问题。

例: Yes, I am interested in news because it keeps me informed about important events happening around the world every day.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，表达不够清晰。建议使用正确的句子结构，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I usually get news by watching television or checking my phone, which constantly updates me with the latest information. Nowadays, it's very easy for everyone to access news.

提案: 回答中有双重否定和语法错误，表达不清晰。建议直接表达观点，使用正确的语法，并且用连接词丰富内容。

例: I don't want to be a journalist because they need to learn a lot of information quickly, and I don't think I have that ability.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和不连贯的表达。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并且用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I didn't read the news this morning because I was nervous and busy, but I will read it if I have time later.

提案: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不够清晰。建议简洁表达观点，使用连接词，并且避免重复。

例: We often talk about important news because everyone knows about it, but we usually don't discuss less famous news since many people are unaware of it.

× Yes, I'm interested in news because news, everyday news reports some some some things that happened in the world and it is very important for me to know what's important in the world.

✓ Yes, I'm interested in the news because the news, everyday news reports some things that happened in the world and it is very important for me to know what's important in the world.

“news”作为不可数名词，前面需要加定冠词“the”表示特指。此外，重复的“some”应去掉。

× I find news when I watch televisions or when I my phone always on on give me some news I can know.

✓ I find news when I watch television or when my phone is always on and gives me some news I can know.

“television”作为不可数名词不加复数形式。动词“give”应与主语“phone”保持一致，使用第三人称单数形式“gives”。“my phone always on on”结构不完整，需补充“is”使句子完整。

× So I think this is very easy for nowadays everyone can get a lot of news and information.

✓ So I think this is very easy because nowadays everyone can get a lot of news and information.

“for nowadays”搭配不当，应改为“because nowadays”表示原因。

× I think I won't not be a journalist because journalist needs to know a lot of things in a very short time.

✓ I think I won't be a journalist because a journalist needs to know a lot of things in a very short time.

“won't not”是双重否定，应改为“won't”。“journalist”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× So I think I can have this ability to do these things and I think journalists need know lots of things.

✓ So I think I can have this ability to do these things and I think journalists need to know lots of things.

“need”后面缺少不定式“to”，应为“need to know”。

× And didn't read the news in this morning because I'm very nervous now and busy so I I didn't read the news but if I have time I will do this.

✓ I didn't read the news this morning because I'm very nervous now and busy, so I didn't read the news, but if I have time I will do this.

句子缺少主语“I”。“in this morning”应改为“this morning”，因为“morning”前不加介词“in”。

× Some very important news we talk about because I think everyone know and this is very big and powerful news.

✓ Some very important news we talk about because I think everyone knows and this is very big and powerful news.

“everyone”是单数，动词应使用第三人称单数形式“knows”。

× So everyone will talk about this, but something is not a very, very famous news.

✓ So everyone will talk about this, but some news is not very, very famous.

“something”用法不当，应改为“some news”表示一些新闻。

× We don't talk and we we even know this news. We even unknow this news.

✓ We don't talk and we don't even know this news. We even don't know this news.

“unknow”不是正确的词，应使用“don't know”。句子缺少助动词“don't”。