News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免出现与问题无关的内容，如“I'm interested in you”，并且要更自然流畅地表达观点。可以简洁明了地说明自己对新闻的兴趣，并具体说明喜欢哪些类型的新闻及原因。

例: Yes, I am interested in news because it helps me stay informed about current events. I usually follow political, entertainment, and fashion news, which keeps me updated on different aspects of the world.

提案: 回答时应注意语法和表达的准确性，如“online platforms like social media apps such as Weibo and Weixin”。可以使用连接词使句子更连贯，并具体说明这些平台的优点。

例: I usually get news from online platforms like social media apps such as Weibo and Weixin because they offer a variety of perspectives and real-time updates, which makes it convenient and quick to learn about the world.

提案: 回答时应避免重复和语法错误，表达要更简洁明了。可以先直接回答是否愿意，然后说明原因，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I have never considered being a journalist because it seems quite challenging. You need to write a lot and maintain a clear perspective while organizing your thoughts carefully.

提案: 回答时应避免口语填充词如“uh”和“you know”，并且句子结构应更规范。可以先直接回答问题，然后用连接词说明原因。

例: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I was focused on preparing for this exam and had to drive for an hour. Also, I wasn't in the mood to read news, so I plan to catch up tomorrow.

提案: 回答时应注意语法和表达的完整性，避免句子断裂。可以使用连接词使表达更连贯，并具体说明谈论新闻的好处。

例: Yes, we often discuss news with each other. Recently, we shared news about a young celebrity who suddenly passed away. I think talking about news helps maintain our relationships and allows us to share different perspectives.

× Yes, I'm interested in you.

✓ Yes, I'm interested in it.

这里的代词使用错误。'interested in you' 意思是对“你”感兴趣，而上下文中应指对“新闻”感兴趣，应该用中性代词 'it'。

× I usually find some news from online platform like social media app Weibo and Wei Xin and they provide variety of perspective and real time updates and I think it is a good way to learn this world and it's quite convenient and quick as well.

✓ I usually find some news on online platforms like social media apps Weibo and Wei Xin. They provide a variety of perspectives and real-time updates, and I think it is a good way to learn about this world. It's quite convenient and quick as well.

介词使用错误，应该用 'on' 来表示在网络平台上获取新闻。'platform' 应该用复数 'platforms'，'variety of perspective' 应为 'a variety of perspectives'，'real time' 应为复合形容词 'real-time'，'learn this world' 应为 'learn about this world'。

× Actually, I never thought about I could be a journalist because I it's kind of a challenging thing for me 'cause you have to write a lot of things and you always keep a clear perspective to report something and how to write, how to think, how to organize, and it's quite challenging.

✓ Actually, I never thought that I could be a journalist because it's kind of a challenging thing for me 'cause you have to write a lot of things and always keep a clear perspective to report something, and know how to write, how to think, how to organize. It's quite challenging.

句子结构错误，'thought about I could' 应改为 'thought that I could'。'I it's' 是多余的，应删去 'I'。另外，句子较长，适当断句更清晰。

× Besides, I'm not in a good mood to read some news, so maybe tomorrow.

✓ Besides, I'm not in a good mood to read any news, so maybe tomorrow.

'some news' 在否定句中通常用 'any news' 更合适。

× Recently we just shared a news a young celebrity just passed away suddenly.

✓ Recently we just shared news that a young celebrity passed away suddenly.

'a news' 是错误的，'news' 是不可数名词，不加冠词。句子中缺少连接词 'that' 来引导宾语从句。