News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn để trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi.

例: Yes, I am quite interested in news because it helps me stay informed about events happening around the world.

提案: Bạn trả lời khá tốt nhưng có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, nên nói rõ hơn về cách các nền tảng này giúp bạn cập nhật tin tức.

例: I usually find news on my laptop or TV, mainly through popular social media platforms like Facebook Messenger and Zello, because they allow me to receive updates quickly and conveniently.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý rõ ràng nhưng cấu trúc câu chưa tự nhiên và có lỗi nhỏ. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh dùng cụm từ không chính xác như "that's not so my type".

例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because the job is very stressful and demanding. For example, journalists often have to work under tight deadlines and handle difficult situations.

提案: Bạn trả lời tốt với câu trả lời đầy đủ và rõ ràng. Tuy nhiên, bạn có thể sử dụng thêm từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, I have read some news this morning about educational issues since I am currently a student. I found the articles very interesting because they discuss recent changes in the school's curriculum.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ và câu chưa tự nhiên. Bạn nên tránh dùng cụm từ như "share with" mà nên dùng "talk about" hoặc "discuss" và chú ý số nhiều của danh từ.

例: Yes, I usually talk with my friends about news related to education because we are both students, and the news helps us a lot in our studies.

× I'm quite interested in news because it's helps me to come up with the news in around the world and.

✓ I'm quite interested in news because it helps me to come up with the news around the world.

The verb 'helps' should be used with the third person singular subject 'it'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'it's helps' which is ungrammatical. Also, 'in around the world' is redundant; 'around the world' is sufficient.

× I'm quite interested in news because it's helps me to come up with the news in around the world and.

✓ I'm quite interested in news because it helps me to come up with the news around the world.

The preposition 'in' before 'around the world' is incorrect and redundant. The correct phrase is 'around the world' without 'in'.

× I often find news on my laptop or TV mainly through popular social media platforms like Facebook Messenger and Zello because they allow me to stay updated quickly.

✓ I often find news on my laptop or TV mainly through popular social media platforms like Facebook Messenger and Zello because they allow me to stay updated quickly.

No correction needed for prepositions in this sentence.

× No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because the job can be very stressful and demanding, especially that's not so my type.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because the job can be very stressful and demanding, especially since that's not my type.

The phrase 'that's not so my type' is incorrect. It should be 'since that's not my type' to correctly express the reason. 'So' is unnecessary and ungrammatical here.

× No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because the job can be very stressful and demanding, especially that's not so my type.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because the job can be very stressful and demanding, especially since that's not my type.

The preposition 'so' is incorrectly used here; 'since' is the correct conjunction to indicate reason.

× Yes, I have read some news this morning about educational issues since I am currently a student.

✓ Yes, I read some news this morning about educational issues since I am currently a student.

The phrase 'this morning' is a finished time period, so the simple past tense 'read' is more appropriate than the present perfect 'have read'.

× Yes, I usually share with my friends about the news related to education because we are both students and the news help us a lot in studying.

✓ Yes, I usually share with my friends about the news related to education because we are both students and the news helps us a lot in studying.

The noun 'news' is singular, so the verb should be 'helps' instead of 'help' to agree in number.