News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答不够流畅，存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免重复和语法错误。

例: No, I'm not very interested in the news because it often focuses on policies, which I find difficult to understand.

提案: 回答不连贯，语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议使用连贯的句子，正确使用时态和词汇，明确说明获取新闻的方式。

例: I usually get news through apps on my phone, which recommend articles based on my interests.

提案: 回答中断且语法错误明显，表达不完整。建议用完整句子表达自己的观点，并说明原因。

例: No, I would not like to be a journalist because I'm not good at expressing myself, either in writing or speaking.

提案: 回答较为完整，但表达稍显简单。建议增加连接词使句子更流畅。

例: No, I haven't read the news this morning because I was busy exercising to keep fit and build muscle.

提案: 回答语法错误多，表达不清晰，内容不完整。建议使用完整句子，明确说明谈论新闻的内容和原因。

例: Yes, I often talk with my friends about news that affects our lives. For example, when I studied in Belgium last semester, we discussed local news that was important to us.

× And in the past few weeks, I using apps.

✓ And in the past few weeks, I have been using apps.

这里缺少助动词，正确的现在完成进行时态结构是“have been + 动词-ing”，表示过去几周一直在使用应用程序。

× Yes, I usually talks with my friends about the news, but what we focus on is, are that the?

✓ Yes, I usually talk with my friends about the news, but what we focus on is that which can affect our lives.

主语“I”是第一人称单数，动词应使用原形“talk”，而不是第三人称单数形式“talks”。

× So what we focus most is some.

✓ So what we focus on most are some things.

“some”后面应有可数名词复数形式，且谓语动词应与复数主语一致，使用“are”。

× I think journalists isn't an.

✓ I think journalists aren't.

“journalists”是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式“aren't”，而不是单数“isn't”。

× I was busy in doing some exercise in the morning because I want to keep fit and gain more muscles.

✓ I was busy doing some exercise in the morning because I want to keep fit and gain more muscles.

“busy”后面直接跟动词的-ing形式，不需要介词“in”。