News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and repetition such as 'I I'. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement, for example, 'news broadens' and 'helps' instead of 'help'. Keep your answer concise and clear within 3-4 sentences.

例: Yes, I am interested in news because it helps me stay informed about current events. It broadens my perspective and assists me in making important decisions.

提案: Avoid filler words such as 'uh' and use correct tense, for example, 'they update me' instead of 'they updated me'. Use linking words like 'besides' or 'in addition' to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I usually find news on social media platforms like Facebook, where I follow several channels that update me about recent events. In addition, I watch news channels on YouTube to get more information.

提案: Avoid redundancy by not repeating 'because'. Use linking words like 'as' or 'since' to connect reasons. Also, try to combine sentences for better flow.

例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist as the job is very demanding with tight deadlines and unpredictable hours. I prefer a more stable and predictable career.

提案: Use correct expressions such as 'I was in a rush'. Also, use linking words like 'usually' and 'additionally' appropriately to connect ideas. Keep sentences concise and clear.

例: No, I did not read the news this morning because I was in a rush. Usually, I follow the news in the evening when I have more free time. Additionally, I read detailed coverage and analysis during the weekends.

提案: Try to use more natural expressions like 'we usually don't talk about the news'. Also, use linking words such as 'because' effectively and avoid redundancy.

例: No, we usually don't talk about the news when we meet. Instead, we mostly discuss our personal lives and hobbies because many of my friends are not very interested in news.

× The news broadens my perspectives and help me to take important decisions.

✓ The news broadens my perspectives and helps me to take important decisions.

The subject 'news' is singular, so the verb should be in singular form 'helps' to agree with the subject. This is a subject-verb agreement error.

× No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist and because the job of a journalist is very demanding because of tight deadlines and it is very unpredictable.

✓ No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because the job of a journalist is very demanding due to tight deadlines and it is very unpredictable.

The phrase 'and because' is incorrect here; 'because' alone is sufficient to express the reason. Also, 'due to' is more appropriate than 'because of' in this context. This is a modal verb usage and conjunction error.

× No, I did not read the news this morning because I was in rush.

✓ No, I did not read the news this morning because I was in a rush.

The phrase 'in rush' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'in a rush' which requires the indefinite article 'a'. This is a past tense and article usage error.

× Additionally, I go on detailed coverage and analysis on the weekends.

✓ Additionally, I go through detailed coverage and analysis on the weekends.

The verb 'go' should be followed by the preposition 'through' when referring to reviewing or examining something. 'Go on' is incorrect in this context. This is an incorrect use of prepositions error.