News— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答直接且自然，但句子较长，信息可以更精炼并用连接词改善逻辑。此外可增加具体偏好（如类型或渠道）以丰富内容。练习控制在最多五句内，避免重复表达“interested”与“curious”的近义词堆砌。

例: Yes, I'm very interested in news because I like knowing what's happening around the world. I usually read short summaries or watch evening news programs to keep up, especially about technology and international affairs.

提案: 回答信息完整但存在重复（“I always I always”），句子过长且缺少清晰连接词來分段说明原因和举例。建议修正重复错误，使用一至两句分别说明主要方式和原因，并提供具体平台或例子以增加细节。

例: I usually get my news from social media because it's updated quickly. For example, I follow official news accounts on Twitter and independent reporters on Instagram, so I can see different perspectives on the same event.

提案: 回答直接、理由明确并包含具体例子，结构良好。可以稍微精简并加入少量个人信息（如是否欣赏记者的某些方面）来让答案更自然、更圆润。

例: No, I wouldn't like to be a journalist because the job is quite demanding. Journalists often travel for breaking stories and face tight deadlines, and I don't feel confident about handling that pressure or improving my writing quickly.

提案: 回答清楚并给出原因，同时说明习惯（晚上看新闻），结构良好。可略微合并句子以避免重复“read news/ catch up”并可补充如何在晚上跟进（例如通过App或节目）。

例: No, I didn't read the news this morning because I woke up late at about 11:00 and went straight to lunch. I usually catch up in the evening using a news app or a nightly bulletin.

提案: 回答内容良好但存在小重复（两次使用“usually”），句子略长。建议合并句子，用一两个连接词展示因果，并提供具体例子（讨论何种新闻或一次具体对话）来增强说服力。

例: Yes, I often discuss news with friends because we all have different views. For example, we sometimes debate political developments or tech stories, which helps me see other perspectives and better understand the issues.

× I always I always find news on the social media because the news on the social media are the most updated one and there are many official accounts and individuals who post news so that I can find the news about the single event from different perspective which helps me to form a more comprehensive understanding of this event.

✓ I always find news on social media because the news on social media are the most up-to-date, and there are many official accounts and individuals who post news, so I can find information about a single event from different perspectives, which helps me form a more comprehensive understanding of the event.

存在重复词（"I always I always"）和句子结构过长导致逻辑不清。另有词形与搭配问题："the social media" — 一般说法为"social media"或"the media"；"the most updated one" 应为形容词短语"up-to-date"且不用one；"different perspective" 应为复数"different perspectives"。建议拆分长句，去掉重复，调整名词单复数和形容词搭配，使语句更简洁流畅。

× I wouldn't like to be a journalist because it's very demanding and exhausting profession.

✓ I wouldn't like to be a journalist because it's a very demanding and exhausting profession.

在可数名词前需要冠词；这里 profession 为可数名词，需用不定冠词 a。错误原因是忽略了职业前的冠词。建议记住可数单数名词通常需要冠词或其他限定词（a/an/the/my 等）。

× I didn't read news this morning because I woke up at about 11:00 AM.

✓ I didn't read the news this morning because I woke up at about 11:00 AM.

在英语中谈论特定的一次性资讯时通常使用定冠词 the："read the news"。原句缺少冠词，显得不自然。建议在谈到特定事件或已知事物时使用 the。

× It was so late that I went straight to have lunch and didn't have time to read news.

✓ It was so late that I went straight to have lunch and didn't have time to read the news.

同上，"read the news" 在此处指特定的新闻（今天的新闻），需要定冠词 the。注意可数或不可数名词与冠词的搭配。

× Yes, I usually share some interesting news with my friend because everyone has their unique perspective when viewing things.

✓ Yes, I usually share some interesting news with my friends because everyone has their unique perspectives when viewing things.

存在人称代词和数的一致问题："my friend" 与上下文应为多位朋友，故用复数"my friends"；另外"perspective" 在泛指多人的看法时应为复数"perspectives"。建议根据语境保持单复一致。

× So I usually listen to my friend's point of view and have some discussion with them about the things happening around us, which can help us form a better understanding.

✓ So I usually listen to my friends' points of view and have discussions with them about the things happening around us, which can help us form a better understanding.

原句中单复不一致：前半句用 my friend（单数）但后半句用 them（复数）。应统一为复数 my friends；此外 point of view 在指多人的意见时可用复数 points of view，discussion 可用复数以匹配习惯用法。建议保持代词与名词数一致，并注意名词单复数匹配。