Sharing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题，建议注意句子结构的完整性和逻辑连贯性，避免断句不清。可以使用更多连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: My parents always encourage me to share with others because they believe it is important. For example, they say sharing helps build good relationships and makes everyone feel happier. Therefore, I try to share things whenever I can.

提案: 回答内容不完整且表达混乱，建议回答时保持句子完整，避免重复和无意义的填充词，提供具体且连贯的细节。

例: I usually share snacks or food with my friends when we meet. Besides that, we often share our opinions and ideas during conversations, which helps us understand each other better.

提案: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议简洁明了地表达观点，避免断句和语法错误，具体说明不愿分享的内容。

例: I prefer not to share my private information because I value my privacy. For example, I keep family matters and personal secrets to myself to protect my and my family's privacy.

提案: 回答中断句不连贯，语法错误较多，建议使用完整句子表达观点，并用连接词使内容更连贯，具体说明共享汽车的优势。

例: Yes, I believe more people will share cars in the future. I read an article that with the development of AI, shared cars will become more common because they offer greater convenience and reduce traffic congestion.

× My parents always encourage and share with others because they believe it is an important to.

✓ My parents always encourage sharing with others because they believe it is important.

句中“an important to”结构不完整且使用错误，应改为“important”作为形容词使用，且“sharing”作为名词形式更合适。

× For example, they told me that sharing not only helps build good relationships, but also make everyone feel happier.

✓ For example, they told me that sharing not only helps build good relationships, but also makes everyone feel happier.

主语“sharing”是单数，谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“makes”，而不是“make”。

× Connected, so I try to share things whenever I can.

✓ I feel connected, so I try to share things whenever I can.

“Connected”单独使用不完整，缺少主语和谓语，需补充完整句子结构。

× It depends on what I have got, You know, sometimes we play with our friends or family.

✓ It depends on what I have got. You know, sometimes we play with our friends or family.

原句中逗号连接两个独立句，需用句号分开，保证句子结构完整。

× And, if I have snacks or some foods and at I will share with my friends.

✓ And, if I have snacks or some food, I will share with my friends.

“foods”通常用作不可数名词“food”，且“and at”是错误拼写，应删除。

× And also we share our opinions. Oh, for example, we talk to each other and share our.

✓ And also we share our opinions. Oh, for example, we talk to each other and share our thoughts.

句尾“share our.”不完整，缺少宾语，需补充完整。

× Well, I think I care much about my private things.

✓ Well, I think I care a lot about my private things.

“care much”用法不当，正确表达应为“care a lot”。

× So I might keep it secret if I don't like to tell other people and something.

✓ So I might keep it secret if I don't want to tell other people something.

“like to tell other people and something”结构混乱，应改为“want to tell other people something”。

× And also, it concludes other secrets.

✓ And also, it includes other secrets.

“concludes”用法错误，应使用“includes”表示“包含”。

× And our family thinks or something like that.

✓ And our family thoughts or something like that.

“thinks”用作动词不合适，句子结构不完整，应改为名词“thoughts”。

× I'm a very. Careful.

✓ I'm very careful.

句子断开不完整，应合并为一句完整句子。

× I think, yes, I've read a paper about. Sharing cars in the future.

✓ I think, yes, I've read a paper about sharing cars in the future.

句中“about.”后不应断句，应连贯表达。

× And it refers that with the A I. Developing, there's more and more shared cars and it.

✓ And it refers that with AI developing, there are more and more shared cars and it

“the A I”中“the”不必要，且“there's”应改为“there are”以匹配复数“cars”。

× Can provide more convenient.

✓ can provide more convenience.

“convenient”是形容词，句中应使用名词“convenience”。