Sharing— Part 1 採点レポート

× They believed that sharing helps build good relationships and teach it teaches kindness.

✓ They believed that sharing helps build good relationships and teaches kindness.

The verb 'teach' should be in the third person singular form 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'sharing'. The original sentence incorrectly uses 'teach' and then repeats 'it teaches', which is redundant and grammatically incorrect.

× Certain personal items are generally not suitable for sharing due to privacy concerns. For example, things like toothbrushes, toes, and underwear should be kept personal to prevent the spread of germs and maintain individual comforts.

✓ Certain personal items are generally not suitable for sharing due to privacy concerns. For example, things like toothbrushes, towels, and underwear should be kept personal to prevent the spread of germs and maintain individual comfort.

The word 'toes' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'towels' as toes are body parts and not items to share. Also, 'comforts' should be singular 'comfort' to match the uncountable noun usage here.

× Moreover, sharing sensitive information or personal belongings that.

✓ Moreover, sharing sensitive information or personal belongings is not advisable.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a main verb and object, making it a sentence fragment. Completing the sentence with a verb and complement corrects the structure.

× So I suggest creating daily schedules and prioritizing tasks.

✓ So I suggested creating daily schedules and prioritizing tasks.

The context is about a past event ('recently I shared'), so the verb 'suggest' should be in the past tense 'suggested' to maintain tense consistency.

× This advice seem to help them stay more organized and reduce stress.

✓ This advice seems to help them stay more organized and reduce stress.

The noun 'advice' is singular and uncountable, so the verb should be 'seems' (third person singular) instead of 'seem'.

× For example, whenever something is positive happens in my life, she is the first person I think of telling.

✓ For example, whenever something positive happens in my life, she is the first person I think of telling.

The phrase 'something is positive happens' is incorrect. It should be 'something positive happens' to correctly modify 'something' with the adjective 'positive' and use the verb 'happens'.

× Since she genuinely celebrates my happiness, sharing good news with her makes the moment even more special and vulnerable.

✓ Since she genuinely celebrates my happiness, sharing good news with her makes the moment even more special and memorable.

The adjective 'vulnerable' is inappropriate here; 'memorable' fits the context better. Also, 'genuinely' is correctly placed modifying 'celebrates'.

× Are you really sure? Positive and interesting news with my friends, such as achievements, upcoming events, or exciting personal experiences.

✓ I usually share positive and interesting news with my friends, such as achievements, upcoming events, or exciting personal experiences.

The original response is fragmented and does not form a complete sentence. Adding a subject and verb completes the sentence properly.

× If I get a good grade or discover a new restaurant, I'd like to tell them because it helps us stay connected and help engaging conversations.

✓ If I get a good grade or discover a new restaurant, I'd like to tell them because it helps us stay connected and helps engage conversations.

The phrase 'help engaging conversations' is incorrect. It should be 'helps engage conversations' to maintain parallel verb forms and correct meaning.

× Sharing such news also creates A supportive and cheerful atmosphere among us.

✓ Sharing such news also creates a supportive and cheerful atmosphere among us.

The article 'A' is incorrectly capitalized and should be lowercase 'a' as it is in the middle of the sentence.