Sharing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但表达略显简单且有语法错误，如“share my best things to others”应为“share my best things with others”。建议注意介词的正确使用，并尝试丰富句式。

例: Yes, my parents always encouraged me to share my belongings with others because they believed it helps build strong friendships.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，如“share my happiness to my best friend”应为“share my happiness with my best friend”。表达重复且不够具体，建议使用更具体的例子并避免重复。

例: I like to share my happiness with my best friend by telling her about my achievements or fun experiences, which often makes her feel joyful too.

提案: 回答较为冗长且语法不准确，如“let me feel unhappy”应为“makes me feel unhappy”。建议简洁表达观点，并使用更准确的语法结构。

例: I believe it's not appropriate to share my negative feelings with others because it might make them feel upset as well.

提案: 回答中存在重复和语法错误，如“shared this to my best friends”应为“shared this with my best friends”，且“what I seen”应为“what I saw”。建议注意时态和介词的正确使用，避免重复。

例: Recently, I returned from Zhangjiajie, a beautiful place, and I shared my travel experiences and gave some lovely souvenirs to my best friends.

提案: 回答表达基本清楚，但“share them good news”应为“share good news with them”。建议注意介词搭配，并尝试使用更丰富的句式。

例: I would first share good news with my parents because they care about me deeply, and I want them to be the first to know.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“get something interesting things”不合适。建议使用更准确的表达，并具体说明分享的内容。

例: I usually share personal news with my friends, like interesting experiences, getting a promotion, or achieving high scores in exams.

× My parents always taught me to share my best things to others and they told me that it's the best way to make friends.

✓ My parents always taught me to share my best things with others and they told me that it's the best way to make friends.

动词后面接介词时，应该用介词'with'表示分享给某人，而不是'to'。这里应使用'share ... with others'。

× I think I like to share my happiness to my best friend because I think it's a kind of way to make other people feel happiness and lucky.

✓ I think I like to share my happiness with my best friend because I think it's a kind of way to make other people feel happy and lucky.

动词'share'后应接介词'with'表示分享给某人，不能用'to'。此外，'feel happiness'应改为'feel happy'，因为'happy'是形容词，修饰感受。

× I think it's not suitable for sharing my bad things to other people because I think if something let me feel unhappy and it's also let other people feel bad or sad.

✓ I think it's not suitable to share my bad things with other people because I think if something makes me feel unhappy, it also makes other people feel bad or sad.

'share'后应接介词'with'表示分享给某人，不能用'to'。'let me feel'应改为'makes me feel'，因为'make'表示使役动词，更合适。

× I have returned from a beautiful scenery called Zhangjiajie and I shared this to my best friends about what I seen, what I what I saw, and I gave them beautiful presents.

✓ I have returned from a beautiful place called Zhangjiajie and I shared this with my best friends about what I saw, and I gave them beautiful presents.

'scenery'是不可数名词，不能用'a'，应改为'place'或其他可数名词。'shared this to'应改为'shared this with'。'what I seen'是错误的过去分词形式，应改为'what I saw'。

× Maybe it's my parents because I'm the only daughter in my family and they always cared about me, so I will share them good news as soon as possible.

✓ Maybe it's my parents because I'm the only daughter in my family and they always care about me, so I will share good news with them as soon as possible.

'share them good news'中，'share'后应接介词'with'，所以应为'share good news with them'。'cared'应改为现在时'care'，因为描述习惯性动作。

× I share the news maybe about myself, such as I get something interesting things or get a high salary or high scores in my examinations.

✓ I share news about myself, such as getting interesting things, a high salary, or high scores in my examinations.

'something interesting things'中'something'和'things'重复，且用法不当，应改为'getting interesting things'。此外，句子结构应更简洁自然。