Sharing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có cấu trúc tốt, nhưng có một số lỗi nhỏ về ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'nice and school supplies' nên là 'nice toys and school supplies'). Bạn nên chú ý phát âm và sử dụng từ chính xác hơn để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

例: Yes, they did. My parents always encouraged me to share toys and school supplies with my younger sisters. They believed that sharing helps children develop kindness and learn how to get along with others. I think those early lessons really shaped my personality.

提案: Bạn đã trả lời đúng trọng tâm nhưng câu cuối cùng 'I say simple way to support each other' không rõ nghĩa và gây khó hiểu. Bạn nên sử dụng câu rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, đồng thời dùng từ vựng phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

例: I like sharing things that bring value to people, such as books, teaching materials, and useful experiences. As a primary English teacher, I also enjoy sharing learning tips or resources with my colleagues because it's a simple way to support each other.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu không chính xác (ví dụ: 'make up certain be shared' không đúng). Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, chính xác và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: Well, personal items like toothbrushes, towels, or makeup should not be shared for hygiene reasons. Also, anything involving passwords, finances, or confidential information must stay private because sharing them can lead to misunderstandings or risks.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt, tự nhiên và có nội dung cụ thể. Tuy nhiên, bạn nên chú ý dùng giới từ chính xác ('shared some PM readers and flat cards with a new teacher' thay vì 'to'). Ngoài ra, có thể thêm một liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: Yes, recently I shared some PM readers and flat cards with a new teacher at my school. She was struggling to choose materials for her class, so I lent her some of my favorites and explained how to use them. She was really grateful.

提案: Ý tưởng của bạn rất tốt và câu trả lời có cảm xúc, nhưng câu đầu hơi khó hiểu do cấu trúc không chính xác ('my husband sees the person who understands me the most'). Bạn nên sửa lại câu để rõ ràng và tự nhiên hơn.

例: Usually, my husband is the person who understands me the most, so whenever something exciting happens, like positive feedback from my students or completing a project, he's always the first one I tell. His reactions make the happiness feel even bigger.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý hay nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác (ví dụ: 'for a simple travel plans' và 'interesting experience for my classroom'). Bạn nên luyện tập cách dùng giới từ và danh từ số nhiều/số ít đúng để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I share things that are meaningful but not too personal, such as simple travel plans, career updates, or interesting experiences from my classroom. My friends also enjoy talking about small achievements like finishing a course or learning a new skill.

× My parents always encouraged me to share toys, nice and school supplies with my, uh, younger sisters.

✓ My parents always encouraged me to share toys, nice things, and school supplies with my, uh, younger sisters.

The phrase 'nice and school supplies' is incorrect because 'nice' is an adjective and needs a noun to modify. It should be 'nice things' to correctly list items. Also, a comma is needed to separate items in a list for clarity.

× I like sharing things that bring values to people, such as books, teaching materials, and useful experiences.

✓ I like sharing things that bring value to people, such as books, teaching materials, and useful experiences.

The word 'values' is plural and usually refers to principles or morals. Here, the intended meaning is 'value' as a singular noun meaning benefit or worth. Therefore, 'value' is correct.

× I say simple way to support each other.

✓ I say it is a simple way to support each other.

The original sentence lacks a subject and verb structure. Adding 'it is' makes the sentence complete and grammatically correct.

× Well, personal items like toothbrushes, towels or make up certain be shared for hygiene reasons.

✓ Well, personal items like toothbrushes, towels, or makeup cannot be shared for hygiene reasons.

The phrase 'make up certain be shared' is incorrect. 'Makeup' is one word, and the modal verb 'cannot' is needed to express prohibition. Also, commas are needed to separate items in the list.

× Also, anything involved being passwords, finances or confidential information must stay private because sharing them can lead to misunderstandings or risk.

✓ Also, anything involving passwords, finances, or confidential information must stay private because sharing them can lead to misunderstandings or risks.

The phrase 'involved being' is incorrect; it should be 'involving'. Also, 'risk' should be plural 'risks' to match 'misunderstandings' and the context.

× Yes, recently I shared some PM readers and flat cards to a new teacher at my school.

✓ Yes, recently I shared some PM readers and flat cards with a new teacher at my school.

The verb 'share' is followed by 'with' to indicate the person receiving something, not 'to'.

× Usually, my husband sees the person who understands me the most, so whenever something exciting happens, like positive feedback from my students or completing a project, he's always the first one I tell.

✓ Usually, my husband is the person who understands me the most, so whenever something exciting happens, like positive feedback from my students or completing a project, he's always the first one I tell.

The verb 'sees' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'is' to identify the person. 'Sees' means 'to look at' and does not fit the intended meaning.

× I share things that are meaningful but not too personal for a simple travel plans, career updates, or interesting experience for my classroom.

✓ I share things that are meaningful but not too personal, such as simple travel plans, career updates, or interesting experiences for my classroom.

The phrase 'for a simple travel plans' is incorrect. 'For' should be replaced with 'such as' to list examples. Also, 'plans' and 'experiences' should be plural to match the list.