Sharing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但可以更简洁，避免重复表达“分享”的概念。建议在回答中使用更多连接词，使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, my parents taught me to share by encouraging me to give my toys and snacks to friends, which helped me develop good relationships early on.

提案: 回答中有语法错误（如动词单复数不一致），且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，注意语法，同时使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: I enjoy sharing delicious snacks at work and funny posts with my friends so we can all have a good laugh.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但存在语法错误（如动词形式和介词使用）。建议注意主谓一致和介词搭配，提升表达准确性。

例: Personal items, especially hygiene-related ones like toothbrushes or towels, should not be shared. Also, passwords and confidential information must be kept private.

提案: 回答中存在多处语法错误和用词不当，影响理解。建议加强语法练习，特别是动词时态和词汇选择，确保表达清晰。

例: Yes, recently I lent my laptop to a colleague because hers had broken down, so she could finish her tasks.

提案: 回答表达了清晰的观点，但句子结构较复杂且有语法错误。建议使用更简洁的句子，并注意时态和主谓一致。

例: Definitely my best friend, because we are very close and understand each other. I know she will be genuinely happy and celebrate with me.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，影响理解。建议加强语法和词汇的准确使用，避免口语化的填充词，提升表达的专业性。

例: I usually share news about my work or studies, like when I achieve extra milestones at work or have the opportunity to pursue a master's degree abroad.

× As someone who enjoy eating snacks, I usually bring snacks I found delicious to the workplace and apart from that, I'm really keen on sharing posts that let me laugh with my friends so they can have a blast as well.

✓ As someone who enjoys eating snacks, I usually bring snacks I find delicious to the workplace and apart from that, I'm really keen on sharing posts that make me laugh with my friends so they can have a blast as well.

主语是单数的'someone'，动词应使用第三人称单数形式'enjoys'。另外，'I found delicious'时态不一致，应改为现在时'find delicious'，因为表达的是习惯性动作。

× Personal items, especially hygiene related items such as toothbrushes or towels is not suitable for share.

✓ Personal items, especially hygiene related items such as toothbrushes or towels, are not suitable for sharing.

主语是复数'items'，谓语动词应使用复数形式'are'。另外，'suitable for share'应改为'suitable for sharing'，动词需用动名词形式。

× Personal items, especially hygiene related items such as toothbrushes or towels is not suitable for share.

✓ Personal items, especially hygiene related items such as toothbrushes or towels, are not suitable for sharing.

介词'for'后面应接动名词形式，不能用动词原形。

× Yes, for example, recently I land my laptop to my colleagues to finish her tasks because her own one has already breakdown.

✓ Yes, for example, recently I lent my laptop to my colleague to finish her tasks because her own one had already broken down.

'land'应为过去式'lent'，表示过去发生的动作。'colleagues'应为单数'colleague'，因为指代单一同事。'breakdown'应分开为动词短语'broken down'，且用过去完成时'had broken down'表示动作发生在过去某一时间之前。

× Yes, for example, recently I land my laptop to my colleagues to finish her tasks because her own one has already breakdown.

✓ Yes, for example, recently I lent my laptop to my colleague to finish her tasks because her own one had already broken down.

'colleagues'是复数，前文指代单一同事，应改为单数'colleague'。

× It definitely my bestie, we were incredibly close and understand each other, so whenever I share news I know this friend can genuinely feel happy for me and celebrate with me.

✓ It is definitely my bestie, we are incredibly close and understand each other, so whenever I share news I know this friend can genuinely feel happy for me and celebrate with me.

句子中时态应保持一致，描述现在的状态应使用现在时。'It definitely my bestie'缺少动词，应加'is'。

× It definitely my bestie, we were incredibly close and understand each other, so whenever I share news I know this friend can genuinely feel happy for me and celebrate with me.

✓ It is definitely my bestie, we are incredibly close and understand each other, so whenever I share news I know this friend can genuinely feel happy for me and celebrate with me.

描述现在的事实和状态时，应使用现在时态，'were'应改为'are'。

× Wow, I usually share news related to my work or study with my friends, such as when I got an extra mile in work or I can do a master degree overseas such this.

✓ Wow, I usually share news related to my work or study with my friends, such as when I go the extra mile at work or when I can do a master's degree overseas like this.

'got an extra mile'表达不正确，应为'go the extra mile'。'in work'应为'at work'。'do a master degree'应为'do a master's degree'。'such this'表达错误，应为'like this'。