Sharing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法と語順の誤りが多く、意味が取りにくいです。まずは“誰も教えられなかった”という意味をシンプルに表現する練習をしてください。肯定・否定の取り扱いに注意し、トピック文→理由の順で話す習慣をつけましょう。例文を暗唱し、同様の質問で応用できるようにして下さい。

例: No, my parents didn't teach me to share when I was a child. Because they were quite busy, I mostly learned to be independent, so sharing has always felt a bit difficult for me.

提案: 答えが不完全で意味が途切れています。まずは主題文で「何を共有するか」を明確にし、その後で理由を一つか二つに絞って説明してください。接続詞（because, so, because of）を使って文をつなぐ練習をしてください。

例: I like to share my books with others because I often find books I enjoyed can spark good discussions. By lending books to friends, we can exchange opinions and learn new perspectives.

提案: 語彙の選択と表現が不明瞭です。共有に向かない物（例：下着、化粧品、個人デバイス）を具体的に挙げ、理由（衛生面やプライバシー）を一文で説明する構成を練習してください。簡潔に話すことを意識しましょう。

例: I think personal items like underwear or toothbrushes are not suitable for sharing because of hygiene concerns. Similarly, people usually don't like sharing items that are closely in contact with the body.

提案: 時制と動詞の使い方が不自然です。最近の行為を表すときは現在完了や現在進行形を正しく使ってください。具体的な状況（誰に、どんな本を、なぜ貸したか）を加えると自然になります。

例: Yes, I have been lending a textbook to a friend recently because they needed it for a course. I shared my course materials so they could catch up with the lessons.

提案: 主語の単複や語順の誤り、意図の不明瞭さがあります。最初に誰に知らせたいかを明確に述べ、理由（親しい関係、相談したい）を続けてください。文を二文以内にまとめる練習をしてください。

例: I would tell my parents first because we are close and I value their opinions. Even though I live away from them, I always want to share important news with them.

提案: 発想は良いですが文法と語順に誤りがあります。共有するニュースの種類を明確に述べ、接続詞で理由や効果をつなぎましょう。複数形や前置詞（about, from）の使い方に注意してください。

例: I often share political news with my friends because we enjoy discussing current events. Talking about politics helps me learn different perspectives and deepen my understanding.

× No one did not be told by my parents sharing. It's difficult for me.

✓ My parents did not teach me to share. It is difficult for me.

The original sentence has a double negative and incorrect passive structure. 'No one did not be told by my parents sharing' is ungrammatical. Use active voice: 'My parents did not teach me to share.' Also use 'It is' rather than contraction if formal; 'It's difficult for me' is acceptable. Suggestion: Use simple past active voice for past events and avoid double negatives.

× I'd like to share my books with others because the book is. You can't, not by reading books and.

✓ I'd like to share my books with others because books can be enjoyed by many people when they read them.

The original contains fragmented sentences and incorrect pronoun references ('the book is.') and extraneous negation. Replace fragments with a clear clause expressing reason: 'books can be enjoyed by many people when they read them.' Use plural 'books' consistently and avoid unnecessary commas and negatives.

× I think the cross is is not suitable for sharing because people can people don't like we're closely start. I've already worn by others.

✓ I think clothes are not suitable for sharing because people do not like others to wear what they have already worn.

Several issues: 'the cross' is likely a typo for 'clothes'; duplicated 'is is'; confusing clauses like 'people can people don't like we're closely start' and wrong passive 'I've already worn by others.' Correct to 'clothes are not suitable for sharing' and use clear active clauses: 'people do not like others to wear what they have already worn.' Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun references.

× I'm sealed my book with others these days. The textbook I have is needed for my friend.

✓ I've lent my book to others recently. The textbook I have is needed by my friend.

'I'm sealed my book' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I've shared' or 'I've lent.' Use present perfect 'I've lent' for recent actions with present relevance. Use 'lend ... to' and passive 'needed by my friend' or active 'my friend needs.' Correct prepositions: 'lend to' and 'needed by.'

× My parent. I live apart from my parents' house. Or are my parents want to know about my news?

✓ My parents. I live away from my parents' home, and they want to know my news.

'My parent.' is singular but context implies plural; use 'My parents.' 'I live apart from my parents' house' is understandable but 'live away from my parents' home' is more natural. 'Or are my parents want to know about my news?' is ungrammatical—combine into one fluent sentence: 'and they want to know my news.' Avoid auxiliary errors and ensure pronoun number consistency.

× I often see you. A political news with my friends. I like discussing about the political events with my friends. I can learn a lot from perspective of my friend.

✓ I often discuss political news with my friends. I like discussing political events with them. I can learn a lot from my friends' perspectives.

Original sentences are fragmented and have article and preposition errors: 'A political news' should be 'political news' (uncountable), 'discussing about' should be 'discussing' or 'talking about,' and 'from perspective of my friend' should be 'from my friends' perspectives.' Combine fragments into coherent sentences, correct articles for uncountable nouns, and use plural possessive for multiple friends' perspectives.'