Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm sai (ví dụ: "come communion" không rõ nghĩa). Hãy sử dụng câu ngắn gọn, trực tiếp và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

例: I don't watch movies very often because my schedule is usually busy. However, when I have free time, I like to watch comedies because they help me relax and unwind after a hectic week.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và câu trúc rõ ràng hơn. Tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và phát âm không chuẩn. Hãy liệt kê thể loại phim một cách rõ ràng và giải thích lý do bạn thích chúng bằng cách dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc.

例: I usually watch action, science fiction, and psychological movies. I enjoy these genres because they help me relax and also broaden my knowledge.

提案: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là chia động từ và cách dùng giới từ. Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer watching movies at home because I am a student and need to save money. Also, watching at home is more comfortable since I don't have to go anywhere.

提案: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh lặp từ và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng hơn.

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful. For example, since I am learning English, I often watch English movies. This helps me improve my pronunciation and language skills, and it also helps me relax.

× I usually spend my time watching a come communion.

✓ I usually spend my time watching a comedy.

The phrase 'a come communion' is incorrect and seems to be a mispronunciation or misspelling. The correct word is 'comedy,' which is a genre of movie. Using the correct noun improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× That I can relax and unwind after a hectic week.

✓ That helps me relax and unwind after a hectic week.

The original sentence is a fragment and lacks a main verb. Adding 'helps me' completes the sentence structure, making it a complete and grammatically correct sentence.

× There is a lot of tie up movie that I like such as action, fiction and psychology an I feel like watching a movies that can make me feel very chill out and relax after a busy week and also can broaden my knowledge an yeah.

✓ There are a lot of tie-up movies that I like, such as action, fiction, and psychology, and I feel like watching movies that can make me feel very chilled out and relaxed after a busy week and also can broaden my knowledge.

The phrase 'There is a lot of tie up movie' is incorrect because 'movie' should be plural to match 'a lot of.' Also, 'a movies' is incorrect; 'movies' should not have an article 'a.' Correct subject-verb agreement and plural forms are necessary for grammatical accuracy.

× I still depends on my parents money, so I have to save their money and so I tend to stay at home in watch something that I like.

✓ I still depend on my parents' money, so I have to save their money, and so I tend to stay at home and watch something that I like.

The verb 'depends' should be 'depend' to agree with the subject 'I.' Also, 'parents money' needs a possessive apostrophe: 'parents' money.' The phrase 'stay at home in watch' is incorrect; it should be 'stay at home and watch.' These corrections fix subject-verb agreement, possessive form, and conjunction usage.

× I think it's very useful to watch a movies in a different language.

✓ I think it's very useful to watch movies in a different language.

The article 'a' should not be used before the plural noun 'movies.' Removing 'a' corrects the quantifier usage.

× Oh I'm tend to watch a English movie.

✓ Oh, I tend to watch English movies.

The phrase 'I'm tend' is incorrect; it should be 'I tend.' Also, 'a English movie' is incorrect because 'English' starts with a vowel sound, so the article should be 'an' if singular, but since 'movies' is plural, no article is needed. Correcting these improves grammatical accuracy.

× It not only can improve my pronunciation and my English skill but also can make me feel relaxed after.

✓ It can not only improve my pronunciation and my English skills but also make me feel relaxed afterwards.

The placement of 'not only' should be after the modal verb 'can' for correct sentence structure. Also, 'skill' should be plural 'skills' to match the context. Adding 'afterwards' clarifies the timing. These changes improve sentence flow and grammatical correctness.