Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tự nhiên và có ví dụ minh họa, nhưng cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ lặp lại và sửa lỗi nhỏ như 'an escape' thành 'an escape' hoặc 'to escape'.

例: I often watch movies because they help me relax and escape from the busy daily life. For instance, I usually watch films with my friends and family on weekends.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng chính xác để mô tả thể loại phim bạn thích.

例: In my free time, I usually watch fantasy movies. For example, I enjoy the Harry Potter series because it has interesting characters and an exciting story.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, câu không hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do một cách rõ ràng, tránh những câu không liên quan.

例: I definitely prefer watching movies at home because I can enjoy them comfortably with my family and friends.

提案: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách diễn đạt để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn. Bạn nên nói rõ hơn về lợi ích cụ thể của việc xem phim nước ngoài.

例: Yes, definitely. Watching movies in other languages is very helpful for me to practice my listening and speaking skills.

× I frequently watch movies 'cause it helps me to relax, an escape from the hustle and bustle.

✓ I frequently watch movies because they help me to relax, an escape from the hustle and bustle.

The phrase 'an escape' is incorrect here because 'escape' is used as a countable noun but should be uncountable or rephrased. Also, 'it helps' should be 'they help' to agree with the plural subject 'movies'.

× For example, I watch films with my friends and families after weekend.

✓ For example, I watch films with my friends and family after the weekend.

The word 'families' should be singular 'family' when referring to one's own family. Also, 'after weekend' needs the definite article 'the' to be grammatically correct.

× In my free time I usually want movies, some famous frames and Harry Porter is a. Interesting. Our freedoms. Be 'cause it has a interesting characters known as Harry Potter.

✓ In my free time, I usually watch movies, some famous films, and Harry Potter is interesting because it has interesting characters known as Harry Potter.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains nonsensical phrases like 'want movies' and 'our freedoms'. It should be restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness. 'a interesting' should be 'an interesting'.

× Absolutely I. I'm very into watching at home be 'cause I sometimes watch movies with my family and friends. To help me on white an avocado thing.

✓ Absolutely, I prefer watching at home because I sometimes watch movies with my family and friends to help me relax.

The phrase 'I'm very into watching at home' is awkward; 'prefer watching at home' is better. 'be 'cause' should be 'because'. The phrase 'To help me on white an avocado thing' is nonsensical and replaced with 'to help me relax' for meaning.

× Yes, definitely. Watching movies in other languages is very essential to help me a practice reading and speaking.

✓ Yes, definitely. Watching movies in other languages is very essential to help me practice reading and speaking.

The phrase 'help me a practice' is incorrect; 'help me practice' is the correct form. 'Practice' here is a verb, so no article 'a' is needed.