Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but can be more natural and concise. Instead of saying 'I don't watch movies regularly as my schedule is very busy,' you can say 'I rarely watch movies during the week because of my busy schedule, but I usually watch them on weekends.' This makes your response more fluent and effective.

例: I rarely watch movies during the week because of my busy schedule, but I usually watch them on weekends to relax.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical errors and unclear phrases like 'an from distracting from the daily stress of my lap.' Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. For example, say 'I usually watch comedy movies because they help me relax and take my mind off daily stress.' Also, avoid redundancy and keep sentences concise.

例: I usually watch comedy movies because they help me relax and take my mind off daily stress.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical mistakes. Try to structure your response with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words. For example, say 'I prefer watching movies at home rather than in the cinema because cinemas can be noisy and distracting. At home, I can focus better on the movie.' This makes your answer more natural and coherent.

例: I prefer watching movies at home rather than in the cinema because cinemas can be noisy and distracting. At home, I can focus better on the movie.

提案: Your answer is incomplete and unclear at the end. Try to complete your thought and use more precise vocabulary. For example, say 'Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps improve language skills and understand different cultures.' This makes your answer more informative and natural.

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps improve language skills and understand different cultures.

× I usually watch comedy movies which helps in relaxing my mind an from distracting from the daily stress of my lap.

✓ I usually watch comedy movies which help in relaxing my mind and distracting me from the daily stress of my life.

The verb 'helps' should be 'help' to agree with the plural subject 'comedy movies' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'an from distracting' is incorrect; it should be 'and distracting me' to correctly connect the two actions and include the object 'me'. Additionally, 'lap' is likely a typo for 'life'.

× I better first movies to watching at home rather than cinema be cause.

✓ I prefer watching movies at home rather than in the cinema.

The phrase 'I better first movies to watching' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'I prefer watching movies'. Also, 'be cause' is a misspelling of 'because', but the sentence is incomplete and needs restructuring. 'Rather than cinema' should be 'rather than in the cinema' to use the correct preposition.

× Because in cinema there there are many people distracting us, but at home we can focus more on the content to your watching.

✓ Because in the cinema there are many people distracting us, but at home we can focus more on the content we are watching.

The phrase 'in cinema' should be 'in the cinema' to use the definite article correctly. The repeated word 'there' is an error. 'Content to your watching' is incorrect; it should be 'content we are watching' to use the correct pronoun and verb form.

× Yes, it is very useful to watch movies in other languages because it helps us to understand that language is also.

✓ Yes, it is very useful to watch movies in other languages because it helps us to understand those languages as well.

The phrase 'that language is also' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'those languages as well' to correctly refer to multiple languages and express addition. The pronoun 'that' is singular and does not agree with 'languages' which is plural.