Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和重复表达，句子应更简洁自然。例如，“I don't often watch movies because I am quite busy with my part-time job and taking care of my two children. After a busy day, I also have to do household chores and prepare lunch boxes, so I rarely have time to watch movies.”

例: I don't watch movies very often because I have a part-time job and two children to take care of. After work, I need to do household chores and prepare lunch boxes, so I usually don't have time for movies.

提案: 回答时应注意语法和表达的准确性，避免多余词汇。可以说：“I usually watch documentary movies because I enjoy learning about history and discovering diverse cultures and backgrounds of people in different countries. Therefore, documentaries are my favorite type of movie.”

例: I usually watch documentary movies because I enjoy learning about history and exploring different cultures around the world. Documentaries help me understand people's backgrounds in various countries.

提案: 回答应更连贯完整，避免语法错误和不完整句子。可以说：“I prefer watching movies at home because I can pause anytime. Since I am quite busy, I often only have a few minutes to watch a short part before continuing my tasks. Also, I practice English every day, so watching movies at home helps me with that.”

例: I prefer watching movies at home because I can pause whenever I want. Since I am busy, I usually watch in short sessions. Also, watching movies helps me practice English daily.

提案: 回答应更完整且语法正确。可以说：“Yes, I believe watching movies in other languages is useful because it helps improve language skills such as listening and vocabulary. For example, I like watching English videos to enhance my listening ability and learn new words.”

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very helpful. It improves my listening skills and vocabulary. For instance, I watch English movies to practice and learn new words.

× I have a part time job and our two children.

✓ I have a part-time job and two children.

“part time job”应为复合形容词“part-time job”，且“our two children”中“our”不合适，应该直接说“two children”。这里是复数形式的正确使用。

× I don't often watch the movie because it seems now I'm a little bit busy.

✓ I don't often watch movies because it seems now I'm a little bit busy.

“the movie”指特定电影，但这里泛指看电影，应该用复数“movies”或不加冠词。

× I usually watch it documentary movies because I like history and I like to discover diverse culture and background of people in different countries and so documentary is the my favorite kind of a movie.

✓ I usually watch documentary movies because I like history and I like to discover diverse cultures and backgrounds of people in different countries, so documentary is my favorite kind of movie.

“it documentary movies”中“it”多余；“diverse culture and background”应为复数“cultures and backgrounds”；“the my favorite kind of a movie”中“the”和“a”不能同时使用，应去掉“the”或“a”。

× I prefer watching movie at home because I can stop the movie at anytime and I'm quite busy so maybe I'll have a just a few minutes to watch a short period of low movie and then I have to keep going up.

✓ I prefer watching movies at home because I can stop the movie at any time and I'm quite busy, so maybe I'll have just a few minutes to watch a short part of a low-budget movie and then I have to keep going.

“watching movie”应为复数“watching movies”；“at anytime”应为“at any time”；“a just a few minutes”中“a”多余；“short period of low movie”表达不清，改为“short part of a low-budget movie”；“keep going up”应为“keep going”。

× And now I'm practicing English everyday so I'm.

✓ And now I'm practicing English every day, so I am improving.

句子不完整，“so I'm”后缺少谓语，需补充完整表达。

× Yes, I believe watching movies in other languages can help to improve the languages ability and also skills.

✓ Yes, I believe watching movies in other languages can help to improve language ability and skills.

“the languages ability”中“the”不应出现，且“languages”应为不可数名词“language”。

× For example, I like to watch English videos and you can help me improve my listening and vocabulary and the.

✓ For example, I like to watch English videos and they can help me improve my listening and vocabulary.

“you can help me”与上下文不符，应为“they can help me”；句尾“and the”不完整，应删除。