Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваш ответ немного длинный и содержит грамматические ошибки. Постарайтесь сделать ответ более естественным и кратким, например, используйте простые предложения и правильные глагольные формы.

例: I watch movies every evening after finishing my studies and work because I really enjoy them.

提案: Ответ содержит неточности и грамматические ошибки, а также неверную информацию (корейские драмы обычно производятся в Южной Корее). Старайтесь давать точные и грамматически правильные ответы.

例: I especially enjoy watching Korean drama movies, which are usually produced in South Korea.

提案: Ответ повторяет слово "comfortable" несколько раз, что звучит неестественно. Используйте разнообразную лексику и стройте предложения более плавно.

例: I mostly prefer watching movies at home because I can relax in my favorite chair, watch on a big TV, and wear comfortable clothes.

提案: Ответ понятен, но содержит разговорные выражения и грамматические ошибки. Старайтесь использовать более формальный стиль и точные выражения.

例: Watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps improve listening skills and expand vocabulary by reading subtitles and learning new words.

× I really enjoy to watch some kind of movies.

✓ I really enjoy watching some kind of movies.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not an infinitive. Therefore, 'to watch' should be corrected to 'watching'. This is a common verb pattern in English.

× Especially I really into two Korean dramas movies which produced in North Korea.

✓ Especially, I am really into two Korean drama movies which are produced in North Korea.

The phrase 'really into' requires the verb 'am' to be complete. Also, 'dramas movies' is incorrect; it should be 'drama movies' as 'drama' is an adjective here. Additionally, the relative clause needs the verb 'are' to be grammatically correct.

× two Korean dramas movies

✓ two Korean drama movies

The word 'dramas' is plural, but when used as an adjective before a noun, it should be singular 'drama'. Hence, 'dramas movies' should be 'drama movies'.

× which produced in North Korea.

✓ which are produced in North Korea.

The relative clause is missing the auxiliary verb 'are' to form the passive voice correctly. 'Produced' alone is not sufficient.

× Mostly I prefer watching movies at home with my comfortable chair, comfortable TV with a comfortable clothes.

✓ Mostly, I prefer watching movies at home with my comfortable chair, comfortable TV, and comfortable clothes.

The phrase 'a comfortable clothes' is incorrect because 'clothes' is plural and does not take the article 'a'. Also, the sentence needs commas to separate items in the list.

× While you learn something new language, it's really important because you improve your listening skills.

✓ While you learn a new language, it's really important because you improve your listening skills.

The phrase 'something new language' is incorrect. It should be 'a new language' because 'language' is a countable noun and requires an article.

× And while you improve listening skills, you look at subtitles and find kinda new words.

✓ And while you improve your listening skills, you look at subtitles and find kind of new words.

The phrase 'kinda' is informal and should be 'kind of' in formal speech. Also, 'listening skills' should have the possessive pronoun 'your' for clarity.