Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Apni answer e kichu grammar error ache, ar kichu sentence onek bar bar use kora hoyeche. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar e rakhte, ar kichu linking words use korte jate answer ta natural lage. Apni chesta korun answer ta 3-4 sentence er moddhe shesh korte.

例: I love watching movies, especially superhero films like Batman, Superman, and Avengers. I never miss any of their releases because they give me enjoyable moments. Moreover, watching these movies helps me spend my leisure time happily.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu vocabulary use kora hoyeche jeta natural na, ar kichu sentence structure thik nai. Apni chesta korun boro vocabulary er bodole shothik ar relevant word use korte. Ar sentence gulo ke logical vabe link korte linking words diye.

例: I usually watch superhero movies such as Batman, Superman, Deadpool, and Avengers because I enjoy their fantasy elements. The animations are very realistic and high quality, which makes the stories exciting and entertaining.

提案: Apnar answer bhalo, kintu kichu grammar error ache ar sentence gulo onek boro. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke choto ar shothik grammar e korte. Linking words use korle answer ta aro natural hobe.

例: I prefer watching movies in the cinema rather than at home because the cinema offers a relaxing environment with a big screen and excellent sound systems. At home, my screen and sound system are not as good or clear.

提案: Apnar answer e kichu grammar ar sentence structure error ache. Apni chesta korun sentence gulo ke shothik grammar e rakhte, ar linking words use korte jate answer ta logical lage. Vocabulary aro boro korte paren, kintu shothik ar relevant word use korun.

例: Yes, I think watching movies in other languages is useful. For example, as a Bangladeshi, watching Hollywood movies helps me learn English. Also, watching Chinese or Japanese films allows me to learn about their culture and language.

× I didn't miss any movies of these ties.

✓ I didn't miss any movies of these times.

The word 'ties' is incorrect here; the correct plural form is 'times' to refer to periods or occasions. This is a singular and plural issue.

× These gives me enjoyable moments and helps me to spend my leisure times enjoyable.

✓ These give me enjoyable moments and help me to spend my leisure time enjoyably.

The subject 'These' is plural, so the verbs should be 'give' and 'help' (plural form). Also, 'leisure times' should be 'leisure time' (uncountable noun), and 'enjoyable' should be 'enjoyably' (adverb) to modify 'spend'. This is a singular and plural issue and incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs.

× I usually watch superhero movies like Batman, Superman and Deadpool, Avengers ETC because I like their fantasy.

✓ I usually watch superhero movies like Batman, Superman, Deadpool, and Avengers because I like their fantasy.

The phrase 'like Batman, Superman and Deadpool, Avengers ETC' is incorrectly punctuated and structured. 'ETC' is informal and unnecessary here. Also, commas should separate the items properly. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure issue.

× Their animations are like too much expensive, means realistic and their story was totally madness and I love this.

✓ Their animations are very expensive, meaning realistic, and their story was totally mad, and I love it.

'Too much expensive' is incorrect; 'very expensive' is correct. 'Means' should be 'meaning' to connect the ideas. 'Madness' should be 'mad' as an adjective describing the story. 'I love this' should be 'I love it' referring to the story. This involves singular/plural issues and incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs.

× I will prefer the cinema over watching at home, because in cinema hall I got to relax and it's a good environment, a big screen with a good sound effects, sound systems and in my home my sound system and screen are not so much big and clear as well as good.

✓ I prefer the cinema over watching at home because in the cinema hall I can relax, and it's a good environment with a big screen and good sound effects and sound systems. At my home, my sound system and screen are not as big or clear or good.

'I will prefer' is incorrect here; simple present 'I prefer' is better for habitual preference. 'I got to relax' should be 'I can relax' to express ability. 'So much big' is incorrect; 'as big' is correct. This is a future tense issue and incorrect use of adjectives and sentence structure.

× Yes, I think it is useful to watch movies in other language like as I am Bangladeshi, if I watch Hollywood movies I can learn English and if I watch Chinese or Japanese movies their culture is so much attractive and good.

✓ Yes, I think it is useful to watch movies in other languages. For example, as I am Bangladeshi, if I watch Hollywood movies I can learn English, and if I watch Chinese or Japanese movies, their culture is very attractive and good.

'In other language' should be 'in other languages' (plural). 'Like as' is incorrect; 'for example' or 'because' is better. Commas are needed for clarity. This is incorrect use of prepositions and sentence structure.

× I can know about their great words and some other words and their culture so.

✓ I can learn about their great words, some other words, and their culture as well.

'I can know about' is awkward; 'I can learn about' is better. 'And their culture so' is incorrect; 'as well' or 'too' is better. This is a singular/plural and sentence structure issue.