Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to make your answer more concise and grammatically correct. Avoid repetition and use clear time references. For example, say "Nowadays, I watch movies every day, but when I was a child or teenager, I usually watched movies once a week, mostly on weekends."

例: Nowadays, I watch movies every day, but when I was a child or teenager, I usually watched movies once a week, mostly on weekends.

提案: Improve your grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, "Because I have a very stressful life nowadays, I prefer to watch comedy or drama movies since they help me relax and escape from reality. However, I really don't like watching horror movies."

例: Because I have a very stressful life nowadays, I prefer to watch comedy or drama movies since they help me relax and escape from reality. However, I really don't like watching horror movies.

提案: Make your answer clearer and more natural by correcting grammar and using linking words. For example, "I prefer watching movies at home because I like being in my cozy bedroom, relaxing by myself, and enjoying some junk food. That's how I enjoy movies the most."

例: I prefer watching movies at home because I like being in my cozy bedroom, relaxing by myself, and enjoying some junk food. That's how I enjoy movies the most.

提案: Improve your grammar and provide more specific details. Use linking words to connect ideas. For example, "I think watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps you learn faster. In addition, you can understand other cultures, see how people live in different countries, and learn about their challenges and stories."

例: I think watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps you learn faster. In addition, you can understand other cultures, see how people live in different countries, and learn about their challenges and stories.

× I usually watched movie once a week.

✓ I usually watched movies once a week.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to multiple instances of watching movies over time.

× But I really doesn't like to watch horror movie.

✓ But I really don't like to watch horror movies.

The verb 'doesn't' is incorrect with the subject 'I'; it should be 'don't'. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to the genre in general.

× It feels me relaxed and better a time that I can escape from reality.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and is a better time when I can escape from reality.

The verb 'feels' is incorrectly used with 'me'; the correct expression is 'makes me feel'. Also, the sentence structure needed adjustment for clarity.

× I prefer watching movie at home because I really want to be in my place in a cozy bedroom and just chilled by myself eating some junk food and the that's the way I enjoy the movie.

✓ I prefer watching movies at home because I really want to be in my place in a cozy bedroom and just chill by myself eating some junk food, and that's the way I enjoy the movie.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to refer generally. Also, 'chilled' should be 'chill' to correctly express the action.

× I think it's very useful to watch movie in other languages.

✓ I think it's very useful to watch movies in other languages.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to watching films in general.

× It helps you to learn more faster.

✓ It helps you learn faster.

The phrase 'learn more faster' is incorrect; 'more' is unnecessary and 'to' after 'helps you' is optional and often omitted for conciseness.

× you can learn other culture and the way people live in another country and know the the drama, the problem and that's it.

✓ you can learn about other cultures and the way people live in another country and know the drama, the problems, and that's it.

'Culture' should be plural 'cultures' to refer generally. Also, 'learn other culture' requires the preposition 'about'. 'Problem' should be plural 'problems' to match the context.