Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Сіздің жауабыңызда грамматикалық қателер бар және сөйлемдер түсініксіз. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, қысқа әрі анық сөйлеңіз. Мысалы, "I sometimes watch movies because I am busy studying English and physics."

例: I sometimes watch movies because I am busy studying English and physics, so I don't have much free time.

提案: Жауабыңызда сөздерді дұрыс қолданбау және сөйлем құрылымы дұрыс емес. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, фильм түрлерін атаңыз және неге ұнайтынын түсіндіріңіз. Мысалы, "I usually watch crime and romance movies because they help me relax."

例: I usually watch crime and romance movies because they help me relax after a busy day.

提案: Жауабыңыз түсініксіз және грамматикалық қателер көп. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, себебін түсіндіріңіз. Мысалы, "I prefer watching movies at the cinema because I enjoy the big screen and sound."

例: I prefer watching movies at the cinema because I enjoy the big screen and sound, which makes the experience more exciting.

提案: Жауабыңызда сөздерді дұрыс қолданбау және сөйлем құрылымы дұрыс емес. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, артықшылықтарын түсіндіріңіз. Мысалы, "Yes, watching movies in other languages helps improve vocabulary and listening skills."

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages helps improve vocabulary and listening skills, which is useful for language learning.

× I don't have times.

✓ I don't have time.

The word 'time' is an uncountable noun and should not be pluralized as 'times' in this context. Use 'time' to refer to the general concept of available time.

× I learning English and I studying uh, physics and March,

✓ I am learning English and studying physics in March,

The verbs 'learning' and 'studying' need auxiliary verbs to form the present continuous tense. Use 'am' before 'learning' and omit the repeated subject before 'studying' for correct grammar.

× so that's why I don't I think so.

✓ so that's why I don't, I think.

The sentence is confusing and contains redundant phrases. Removing the extra 'I think so' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence structure.

× Actually I can't movies usually watch is it is criminal and romance drums because she's relaxed my brain.

✓ Actually, the movies I usually watch are crime and romance dramas because they relax my brain.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and word choice. 'Can't' is incorrect here, and 'criminal' should be 'crime', 'drums' should be 'dramas'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× because she's relaxed my brain.

✓ because they relax my brain.

The pronoun 'she's' (she is) is incorrect when referring to movies. Use 'they' to refer to plural movies, and 'relax' instead of 'relaxed' to match the present tense.

× For example twinks.

✓ For example, 'Twilight'.

The word 'twinks' is likely a mispronunciation or misspelling. Adding a comma and correcting the example to a known movie title improves clarity.

× Generally I prefer watching movies or the cinema because the interesting I see, I see motion people and so for example, that's this.

✓ Generally, I prefer watching movies at the cinema because it's interesting to see people and motion pictures. For example, that's why.

The preposition 'or' is incorrect; 'at' should be used with 'the cinema'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I agree is full to MO watch movies in other language because you're learning a new language and and upper your wor vocabulary.

✓ I basically agree it is useful to watch movies in other languages because you're learning a new language and improving your vocabulary.

The modal verb phrase 'is full to MO' is incorrect. It should be 'it is useful to'. Also, 'upper your wor vocabulary' is corrected to 'improving your vocabulary' for clarity and correctness.