Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer needs to be clearer and more grammatically correct. Try to directly answer the question first, then add supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and ensure your sentences are complete and natural.

例: I used to watch movies very frequently, but recently I have been busy preparing for my health, so I don't have much time. However, after I take this exam, I will definitely watch more movies.

提案: Your answer should be more coherent and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons or examples. Also, be careful with word choice and sentence structure.

例: I usually prefer watching artistic and romantic films, such as Love Letter, because they remind me of my own experiences. For example, I had a crush on someone in high school, which makes these films very interesting to me.

提案: Your answer is generally clear but contains some errors and unclear words. Use correct grammar and clarify your points. Also, use linking words to make your answer more coherent.

例: I prefer watching movies at home because I can chat and share snacks with my friends. In contrast, watching in the cinema is less enjoyable since it's quiet and you can't do those things.

提案: Your answer is relevant but could be more fluent and grammatically correct. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: Definitely, I enjoy watching English movies without subtitles, and sometimes I mimic the actors to improve my speaking skills. Therefore, watching movies in other languages is a useful way to learn.

× Actually I used to watch movie very frequently but nowadays I'm be busy with my health preparation, so I have same time to watch to watch movies. After I taking I take this exam I definitely.

✓ Actually I used to watch movies very frequently but nowadays I'm busy with my health preparation, so I have the same time to watch movies. After I take this exam, I definitely will watch more.

The sentence contains multiple errors: 'movie' should be plural 'movies' (singular/plural issue), 'I'm be busy' is incorrect; it should be 'I'm busy' (verb form issue), 'have same time' lacks the article 'the' before 'same time' (article error), 'After I taking I take this exam' is incorrect; it should be 'After I take this exam' (verb tense and structure). The corrections ensure proper verb tense, subject-verb agreement, article usage, and plural form to make the sentence grammatically correct and clear.

× I prefer watching artist, artistic and romantic films like Love Letter because it remains me on my use. Like I have the crush of some guy in high school. It's really interesting.

✓ I prefer watching artistic and romantic films like Love Letter because it reminds me of my youth. I had a crush on some guy in high school. It's really interesting.

The phrase 'it remains me on my use' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'it reminds me of my youth'. Also, 'artist' is an adjective here incorrectly used as a noun; 'artistic' is appropriate. 'I have the crush of some guy' should be 'I had a crush on some guy' to reflect past tense and correct preposition use. These corrections fix pronoun misuse, verb tense, and preposition errors.

× I like watch it at home because I can chat and share snacks with my friends while watching. If I watch in the cinema, I can't do those things because there are so many ministries.

✓ I like watching it at home because I can chat and share snacks with my friends while watching. If I watch in the cinema, I can't do those things because there are so many people.

The phrase 'I like watch' is incorrect; after 'like' the verb should be in the '-ing' form, so 'watching' is correct. Also, 'ministries' is a wrong word here; likely the intended word is 'people' or 'audience'. The correction addresses verb form and word choice errors.

× If I watch in the cinema, I can't do those things because there are so many ministries.

✓ If I watch in the cinema, I can't do those things because there are so many people.

The word 'ministries' is incorrect in this context; it should be 'people' to indicate the presence of many individuals. This is a quantifier and word choice error.

× So it is is a useful way to learn another languages.

✓ So it is a useful way to learn another language.

The phrase 'another languages' is incorrect because 'another' is used with singular nouns. The correct form is 'another language'. Also, there is a repeated 'is is' which should be corrected to a single 'is'. This fixes quantifier and repetition errors.