Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为简短且表达较为直接，但缺少连接词和更具体的细节。建议在回答中使用连接词使句子更连贯，并补充更多细节说明原因。

例: I seldom watch movies because I'm still a student, so I have a lot of homework to do during the weekend. Therefore, I usually spend my free time studying rather than watching films.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误，且表达不够自然。建议注意单复数形式，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并丰富细节。

例: Normally, I watch animated movies like Disney films because they are funny and interesting. Moreover, their content is usually light-hearted, which helps me relax.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，句子结构不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词，并注意语法准确性。

例: I prefer watching movies at home because cinemas have many rules. For example, you have to be quiet during the movie, and you cannot use your phone to take pictures.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，表达不够自然。建议注意动词形式和词汇选择，使用连接词使表达更连贯，并提供更具体的例子。

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful, especially for learning a new language. It can improve your speaking and listening skills. In addition, you can learn about local culture and slang from these movies.

× Normally I watch animation movie like Disney movie because they are funny and interesting and the content on are not very serious.

✓ Normally I watch animated movies like Disney movies because they are funny and interesting and the content is not very serious.

这里“animation movie”和“Disney movie”应使用复数形式“animated movies”和“Disney movies”，因为指的是多部电影。内容“content”是不可数名词，谓语动词应使用单数“is”。

× Normally I watch animation movie like Disney movie because they are funny and interesting and the content on are not very serious.

✓ Normally I watch animated movies like Disney movies because they are funny and interesting and the content is not very serious.

句中“content on are”结构不正确，应去掉“on”，直接用“the content is”。

× I prefer to stay at home for watching a movie because there are many rules need to be obeyed when you watch a movie in a cinema like you have to be quiet during the play and you cannot use your phone to take.

✓ I prefer to stay at home to watch a movie because there are many rules that need to be obeyed when you watch a movie in a cinema, like you have to be quiet during the play and you cannot use your phone to take pictures.

“prefer to stay at home for watching”中“for watching”应改为不定式“to watch”。“rules need to be obeyed”前应加关系代词“that”。“use your phone to take”不完整，应补充“pictures”。

× I prefer to stay at home for watching a movie because there are many rules need to be obeyed when you watch a movie in a cinema like you have to be quiet during the play and you cannot use your phone to take.

✓ I prefer to stay at home to watch a movie because there are many rules that need to be obeyed when you watch a movie in a cinema, like you have to be quiet during the play and you cannot use your phone to take pictures.

“rules need to be obeyed”中缺少关系代词“that”，使句子完整。

× Yes, yes, especially when you want to learn a new language. Watch a movie in another language can enhancing your speaking skill and listening skill.

✓ Yes, yes, especially when you want to learn a new language. Watching a movie in another language can enhance your speaking skills and listening skills.

“Watch a movie”应改为动名词“Watching a movie”作主语。“can enhancing”中“enhancing”应为动词原形“enhance”。

× Yes, yes, especially when you want to learn a new language. Watch a movie in another language can enhancing your speaking skill and listening skill.

✓ Yes, yes, especially when you want to learn a new language. Watching a movie in another language can enhance your speaking skills and listening skills.

“speaking skill”和“listening skill”应使用复数形式“speaking skills”和“listening skills”，表示多种技能。

× In addition, you can learn some local faiths or slams from that movie as well.

✓ In addition, you can learn some local customs or slang from that movie as well.

“faiths”应为“customs”（习俗），“slams”应为“slang”（俚语），原词用错，导致表达不准确。