Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it can be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as repeating "watch the movie together" and filler words like "uh." Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

例: I watch movies every week, usually on Saturday night with my whole family. It's a great way for us to bond and spend quality time together.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but could be clearer and more natural. Avoid awkward phrasing like "we use usually think for others preferences." Use linking words to organize your ideas and provide specific reasons.

例: As a family, we usually watch family-oriented movies because we have members of all ages, including small children. Therefore, we choose films that everyone can enjoy and relax to.

提案: Your answer is understandable but contains redundancy and filler words. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your response more coherent and natural.

例: I enjoy both watching movies in the cinema and at home. The big theater offers a unique experience, while watching at home with loved ones creates a cozy atmosphere.

提案: Your answer has good ideas but contains grammatical errors and awkward phrasing like "we can able to." Try to use correct grammar and more precise vocabulary. Also, use linking words to connect your points clearly.

例: Definitely, watching movies in other languages is useful because it helps us learn about different cultures and improve our language skills, which can be helpful when traveling.

× Mainly our movie night is on Saturday with whole family.

✓ Mainly our movie night is on Saturday with the whole family.

The definite article 'the' is required before 'whole family' to specify a particular group, which is the family in this context.

× It is a good time to bond with all the families, uh together while we are watching the movie.

✓ It is a good time to bond with all the family, uh together while we are watching the movie.

The phrase 'all the families' is incorrect here because it refers to multiple families; the speaker means their own family, so 'all the family' is appropriate.

× So we try to watch the movie together.

✓ So we try to watch movies together.

Since the context is about watching movies regularly, the plural 'movies' is more appropriate than the singular 'the movie'.

× As a family we prefer to watch family oriented movies because in our family we have adults all the generation, small kids.

✓ As a family, we prefer to watch family-oriented movies because in our family we have adults of all generations and small kids.

The phrase 'family oriented' should be hyphenated as 'family-oriented' to form a compound adjective. Also, 'adults all the generation' is incorrect; it should be 'adults of all generations' to indicate multiple age groups.

× So it is all we always prefer to watch the movie which everybody can watch and enjoy and relax.

✓ So we always prefer to watch movies that everybody can watch, enjoy, and relax to.

The phrase 'watch the movie' is too specific; 'movies' in plural fits better. Also, 'which' should be 'that' for defining clauses, and the sentence structure is improved for clarity.

× So we use usually think for others preferences too.

✓ So we usually think about others' preferences too.

The phrase 'use usually think' is incorrect; 'usually think' is correct. Also, 'for others preferences' should be 'about others' preferences' to use the correct preposition and possessive form.

× I prefer to do both, watching cinema in a big theater, it's a different feeling we get.

✓ I prefer to do both: watching movies in a big theater; it's a different feeling we get.

The phrase 'watching cinema' is incorrect; 'watching movies' is correct. Also, 'in a big theater' is correct, but punctuation is improved for clarity.

× And uh, watching at home with all your beloved ones is also a special time.

✓ And uh, watching at home with all our beloved ones is also a special time.

The pronoun 'your' is inconsistent with the speaker's perspective; 'our' is appropriate since the speaker is referring to their own family.

× So I do prefer both watching cinema and also watching at home too.

✓ So I do prefer both watching movies in the cinema and also watching at home.

'Watching cinema' should be 'watching movies in the cinema' for clarity and correctness. Also, 'too' is redundant after 'also' and can be omitted.

× Definitely it is worth to watch movies in different languages because we can able to know their culture.

✓ Definitely, it is worth watching movies in different languages because we can learn about their culture.

The phrase 'worth to watch' is incorrect; 'worth watching' is correct. Also, 'can able to' is redundant; 'can' or 'are able to' should be used, but 'can learn' is simpler and correct.

× We can able to learn a different language which we uh, which can help us when we go to different places.

✓ We can learn a different language, which can help us when we go to different places.

'Can able to' is incorrect; 'can learn' is correct. Also, the sentence is simplified for clarity.

× So we will be more thorough with the languages.

✓ So we will be more familiar with the languages.

The word 'thorough' is incorrectly used here; 'familiar' is the appropriate adjective to express better knowledge or comfort with languages.