Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng từ ngữ chính xác hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn. Ví dụ, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng thì đúng, đồng thời nên dùng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.

例: I watch movies almost every day because they help me relax when I'm stressed. Watching movies also has many benefits; for instance, it has helped me improve my English skills. Therefore, I find watching movies very helpful.

提案: Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp, đồng thời sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, nên dùng từ vựng phù hợp và chính xác để diễn đạt ý tốt hơn.

例: My favorite type of movies used to be romantic ones, like K Dramas. However, after watching Stranger Things, I have developed an interest in sci-fi movies because I find their action scenes fascinating.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết và nói lắp. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer watching movies alone at home because it is more comfortable. I can freely express my feelings without worrying about being judged, and I can do whatever I want while watching.

提案: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và từ vựng chính xác, tránh nhầm lẫn từ (ví dụ: 'control' nên là 'culture'). Hãy sử dụng câu rõ ràng, mạch lạc và có liên từ để câu trả lời hiệu quả hơn.

例: Of course, watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps improve communication and speaking skills. Additionally, it exposes you to different cultures and teaches valuable life lessons.

× I watch movies like everyday because they often watch movie when I feel stressed.

✓ I watch movies like every day because I often watch movies when I feel stressed.

The word 'everyday' should be two words 'every day' when referring to frequency. Also, 'they often watch movie' is incorrect because 'they' is plural and 'movie' is singular; it should be 'I often watch movies' to match the subject and plural form.

× Also watching movies have many benefits.

✓ Also, watching movies has many benefits.

The subject 'watching movies' is singular (gerund phrase), so the verb should be singular 'has' instead of 'have'.

× It helped me to learn languages like English because I'm trying to improve my English skills.

✓ It helps me to learn languages like English because I'm trying to improve my English skills.

The sentence talks about a current ongoing effect, so present tense 'helps' is more appropriate than past tense 'helped'.

× So I think watching movie is really helpful for me.

✓ So I think watching movies is really helpful for me.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the general activity of watching multiple movies.

× Well, my favorite kind of movie is romantic, like K Drummer.

✓ Well, my favorite kind of movie is romantic, like K-Drama.

'K Drummer' seems to be a typo or incorrect term; 'K-Drama' is the correct term for Korean dramas, which fits the context.

× I often watch it, but I think I've changed because after watching Stranger Things, I think my first kinds of movie is sci-fi is really fascinating and I really love their action.

✓ I often watch it, but I think I've changed because after watching Stranger Things, I think my favorite kind of movie is sci-fi; it is really fascinating and I really love the action.

'First kinds of movie' is incorrect; it should be 'favorite kind of movie' (singular). Also, 'their action' should be 'the action' to refer to the action scenes in the movies.

× Yeah, the actions and their movies.

✓ Yeah, the action and the movies.

'Actions' should be singular 'action' when referring to action scenes generally. 'Their movies' is unclear; 'the movies' is more appropriate.

× Actually, I prefer watching alone because I find that more comfortable.

✓ Actually, I prefer watching movies alone because I find that more comfortable.

The verb 'watching' needs an object; 'watching alone' is incomplete. Adding 'movies' clarifies the meaning.

× I can express my feelings that no one can judge me.

✓ I can express my feelings so that no one can judge me.

The conjunction 'that' is incorrect here; 'so that' correctly expresses purpose.

× So I think watching, uh, alone is really interesting because you are, you can like do whatever you want while watching.

✓ So I think watching alone is really interesting because you can do whatever you want while watching.

The phrase 'you are, you can like do' is redundant and awkward; simplifying to 'you can do' improves clarity.

× Of course, watching movies in other languages can help you to improve your languages skills like communicate and speaking skills.

✓ Of course, watching movies in other languages can help you improve your language skills like communication and speaking skills.

'Languages skills' should be singular 'language skills'. Also, 'communicate' should be the noun 'communication'.

× And also you can learn about their control to have a great exposure to different control and also you learn a lot of precious life lessons.

✓ And also you can learn about their culture to have great exposure to different cultures and also learn a lot of precious life lessons.

'Control' is incorrect; the intended word is 'culture'. Also, 'different control' should be 'different cultures'. The pronoun 'you learn' is better as 'also learn' for parallel structure.