Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Ваша відповідь містить граматичні помилки та деякі незрозумілі фрази. Спробуйте використовувати правильні форми дієслів і будувати речення більш чітко, уникаючи надмірної довжини. Також варто уникати зайвих деталей, які не відповідають на питання прямо.

例: I don't watch movies very often because I prefer reading. Also, since I combine studying and working, I find it hard to find free time for movies. Instead, I usually listen to podcasts.

提案: Ваша відповідь досить зрозуміла, але є граматичні помилки і повтори. Спробуйте використовувати зв'язки між реченнями для кращої логіки та уникати зайвих пауз і заповнювачів.

例: The kinds of movies I watch depend on who I'm with. For example, with my boyfriend, we usually watch comedies or romantic films. However, when I'm with my best friend, we prefer horror movies.

提案: Ваша відповідь добре структурована, але є невеликі граматичні помилки. Слідкуйте за правильним використанням часів і форм дієслів. Також можна додати більше деталей для покращення змісту.

例: I currently live in Lithuania, so I rarely go to the cinema because most films are in Lithuanian, which I don't understand well. However, when I lived in Ukraine, I preferred watching movies at the cinema because I enjoyed the social atmosphere and the big screen experience with friends.

提案: Ваша відповідь містить багато заповнювачів і незавершених думок. Намагайтеся говорити більш чітко і повністю формулювати свої ідеї. Використовуйте зв'язки для логічного переходу між реченнями.

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful. I usually start by watching English movies with Russian subtitles, then with English subtitles, and finally without any subtitles to improve my listening skills.

× I don't like watch movie and most of the time I prefer reading and also as a person who try to combine education and working is diff, it's really difficult to find free time to watch some movies so I prefer listen podcast and.

✓ I don't like watching movies and most of the time I prefer reading. Also, as a person who tries to combine education and work, it's really difficult to find free time to watch some movies, so I prefer listening to podcasts.

After verbs like 'like' and 'prefer', the gerund form (-ing) should be used, not the base form. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the context. 'Try' should be 'tries' to agree with the singular subject 'person'. 'Working' should be 'work' as a noun here. 'Listen podcast' should be 'listening to podcasts' because 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' and the noun should be plural for general meaning.

× When it comes to watch movie with my boyfriend we probably watch comedy or some romantic movie.

✓ When it comes to watching movies with my boyfriend, we probably watch comedies or some romantic movies.

The phrase 'when it comes to' is followed by a gerund, so 'watch' should be 'watching'. 'Movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the general meaning. Also, 'comedy' and 'romantic movie' should be plural to indicate types of movies.

× Currently, I live in Lithuania, so I don't have many opportunities to go to the cinema because most films are shown in Lithuanian language, which I don't understand well. However, when I lived in Ukraine, I prefer to watching film at the cinema because I enjoy the social atmosphere and watching movie on a big screen with friends.

✓ Currently, I live in Lithuania, so I don't have many opportunities to go to the cinema because most films are shown in the Lithuanian language, which I don't understand well. However, when I lived in Ukraine, I preferred watching films at the cinema because I enjoyed the social atmosphere and watching movies on a big screen with friends.

'Prefer to watching' is incorrect; after 'prefer' followed by 'to', the base form of the verb should be used or use 'prefer watching'. Here, 'preferred watching' is better. 'Film' and 'movie' should be plural 'films' and 'movies' to match the context. Also, 'Lithuanian language' needs the definite article 'the'. The tense should be past ('preferred', 'enjoyed') to match 'when I lived'.

× Definitely yes. It one of the way how I try to learn English language Uh, first of all I watch uh, movie in uh, English but with Russian subtitle, then I try to do it but with English subtitle and uh, at the end I try to watch it without any subtitles and it really.

✓ Definitely yes. It is one of the ways I try to learn the English language. First of all, I watch movies in English but with Russian subtitles, then I try to do it with English subtitles, and at the end, I try to watch it without any subtitles, and it really helps.

The sentence is missing the verb 'is' after 'It'. 'Way' should be plural 'ways' to match 'one of the ways'. 'English language' needs the definite article 'the'. 'Movie' should be plural 'movies'. 'Subtitle' should be plural 'subtitles' because movies usually have multiple subtitles. The sentence was incomplete and needed a proper ending for clarity.