Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và ngắn gọn hơn. Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, hãy nói rõ tần suất và thời gian xem phim một cách tự nhiên.

例: I usually watch movies twice a week, mostly on Saturdays and Sundays.

提案: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn. Hãy giải thích lý do bạn thích thể loại phim đó một cách rõ ràng và mạch lạc, sử dụng liên từ để nối ý.

例: I usually watch horror movies because they are very interesting and have jump scares that make me feel scared.

提案: Bạn cần sử dụng ngữ pháp đúng, tránh lỗi chia động từ và sử dụng từ phù hợp. Hãy trình bày ý kiến rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để nối các lý do và tránh câu dài không rõ ràng.

例: I prefer watching movies at home because it is cheaper and more comfortable. Also, I can watch with my friends or family and eat snacks while watching.

提案: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và từ vựng phù hợp. Hãy trình bày các lợi ích một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng liên từ để nối các ý và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

例: I think watching movies in other languages is useful because it helps you learn new vocabulary, improve your pronunciation, and understand how to have conversations correctly.

× Oh, I often watch movies twice a weeks is often at Saturdays and Sundays.

✓ Oh, I often watch movies twice a week, usually on Saturdays and Sundays.

The word 'weeks' should be singular 'week' because 'twice a week' is the correct expression. Also, 'at Saturdays and Sundays' should be 'on Saturdays and Sundays' because we use 'on' for days of the week.

× Oh, I often watch movies twice a weeks is often at Saturdays and Sundays.

✓ Oh, I often watch movies twice a week, usually on Saturdays and Sundays.

The preposition 'at' is incorrect when referring to days; the correct preposition is 'on' for days like Saturday and Sunday.

× But the kinds of movies I usually I usually watch is horrors because is very very interesting is have the jump scares and is make me scared.

✓ The kinds of movies I usually watch are horror movies because they are very interesting, have jump scares, and make me scared.

The subject 'kinds of movies' is plural, so the verb should be 'are' not 'is'. Also, 'horrors' should be 'horror movies' as a plural noun. The verbs 'is have' and 'is make' are incorrect; they should be 'have' and 'make' respectively, matching the plural subject 'they'.

× But the kinds of movies I usually I usually watch is horrors because is very very interesting is have the jump scares and is make me scared.

✓ The kinds of movies I usually watch are horror movies because they are very interesting, have jump scares, and make me scared.

The verb 'is' is incorrectly used with plural subjects; it should be 'are'. Also, 'is have' and 'is make' are incorrect; the verbs should agree with the plural subject 'they'.

× Umm I prefer this that seems. I prefers watching at home because it's cheap and comfortable and we can watch with anyone's such as friends or parents and we can't eat any.

✓ Umm, I prefer that. I prefer watching at home because it's cheap and comfortable, and we can watch with anyone, such as friends or parents, and we can eat anything.

The phrase 'this that seems' is unclear and incorrect; 'that' is appropriate here. 'Prefers' should be 'prefer' to agree with 'I'. 'Anyone's' is incorrect; it should be 'anyone'. 'Can't eat any' is incorrect; it should be 'can eat anything' to express ability.

× Umm I prefer this that seems. I prefers watching at home because it's cheap and comfortable and we can watch with anyone's such as friends or parents and we can't eat any.

✓ Umm, I prefer that. I prefer watching at home because it's cheap and comfortable, and we can watch with anyone, such as friends or parents, and we can eat anything.

The modal verb 'can't' is incorrectly used to express ability; it should be 'can' to indicate permission or ability to eat while watching movies.

× I think it's useful to watch movie in as a language because it's have you learned new vocabularies and improves your pronunciations and it's also have you how to have a conversation correctly.

✓ I think it's useful to watch movies in another language because it helps you learn new vocabulary, improves your pronunciation, and also shows you how to have a conversation correctly.

The word 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to match the general statement. 'Vocabularies' is incorrect; 'vocabulary' is uncountable and should be singular. 'Pronunciations' should be singular 'pronunciation' as it refers to the general skill. The phrase 'it's have you learned' is incorrect; it should be 'it helps you learn' or similar.

× I think it's useful to watch movie in as a language because it's have you learned new vocabularies and improves your pronunciations and it's also have you how to have a conversation correctly.

✓ I think it's useful to watch movies in another language because it helps you learn new vocabulary, improves your pronunciation, and also shows you how to have a conversation correctly.

The preposition 'in as a language' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'in another language' to indicate watching movies in a different language.