Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is clear but a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your response more concise and natural by combining ideas and avoiding repetition. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

例: I used to watch movies quite often, but due to my busy schedule, I now only watch them about once a month with close friends on weekends.

提案: Your answer has some grammar issues and redundancy. Try to use correct singular/plural forms and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, specify the emotions you feel to make your answer more vivid and natural.

例: I enjoy various movie genres, but my favorites are comedies and thrillers because they evoke strong emotions like laughter and suspense.

提案: Your answer is too long and repetitive, and some sentences are unclear. Try to organize your ideas logically using linking words and avoid repeating words. Also, use more natural expressions.

例: I prefer watching films at home because it's free, and I have the freedom to pause, move around, grab snacks, and adjust the volume as I like.

提案: Your answer is relevant and clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid unnecessary fillers like 'Oh yes' and improve sentence structure for better flow.

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful, especially for language learners. For example, when preparing for my IELTS exam, I watched English films without subtitles, which helped improve my listening skills and vocabulary.

× But now I can do it once a month with my close people on weekends.

✓ But now I can do it once a month with my close friends on weekends.

The phrase 'my close people' is incorrect because 'people' is a plural noun that refers to a group in general, but here the intended meaning is 'close friends', which is the correct plural noun for close companions. Using 'friends' is more natural and grammatically correct in this context.

× I actually watch different genres of movies but one of my favorite genre of movie is comedy and thrillers because I really enjoyed this genre because of a specific emotions that they can give me.

✓ I actually watch different genres of movies but one of my favorite genres is comedy and thrillers because I really enjoy this genre because of the specific emotions that they can give me.

The phrase 'one of my favorite genre of movie' is incorrect because 'one of' requires a plural noun following it, so 'genres' should be plural. Also, 'I really enjoyed' should be 'I really enjoy' to maintain present tense consistency. Additionally, 'a specific emotions' is incorrect because 'emotions' is plural and should not be preceded by 'a'. It should be 'the specific emotions'.

× I prefer watching films at home because I don't need to pay for this and also I really love that I have the freedom to move and pause films and it's also I can grab snacks for films and also I can regulate the volume, volume of movie.

✓ I prefer watching films at home because I don't need to pay for it and also I really love that I have the freedom to move and pause films. Also, I can grab snacks for films and regulate the volume of the movie.

The pronoun 'this' is incorrectly used to refer to 'watching films'; 'it' is the correct pronoun here. The sentence is also run-on and needs to be split for clarity. Repetition of 'volume' is unnecessary. The phrase 'it's also I can' is incorrect and should be rephrased for clarity.

× Oh yes, I think so, especially when you learn languages because when I was preparing for my ILSE exam, I tried to watch films at English language without subtitles, which improved my listening skills and vocabulary.

✓ Oh yes, I think so, especially when you learn languages because when I was preparing for my ILSE exam, I tried to watch films in English without subtitles, which improved my listening skills and vocabulary.

The preposition 'at' is incorrectly used with 'English language'. The correct preposition is 'in' when referring to the language in which films are watched.