Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct articles and plural forms, and avoid repeating the word 'movie' unnecessarily. Also, structure your answer with a clear topic sentence and supporting details using linking words.

例: I watch movies every weekend, usually going to the cinema with my friends because I enjoy the experience. I'm a big fan of Bollywood movies, which I find very entertaining.

提案: Your answer is good but can be improved by reducing filler words like 'uh' and using linking words to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to vary your vocabulary and avoid repeating phrases like 'horror movies' twice.

例: I usually enjoy romantic Bollywood movies, especially those starring SRK, who is one of my favorite Indian actors. Recently, I have also started watching Hollywood horror films and look forward to exploring more in that genre.

提案: Your answer conveys your preference but has grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and ensure sentences are complete and clear. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

例: I prefer watching movies at the cinema because the atmosphere is unique, and I enjoy eating popcorn while watching. The big screen provides an experience that cannot be replicated at home.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer sentence structures. Avoid vague phrases like 'one can learn language' and use linking words to contrast ideas effectively.

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is useful because it helps people learn new languages. However, it can be challenging to understand unfamiliar languages, so I usually prefer watching movies in English or Hindi.

× While watching movies is one of my hobby and I watch movie every weekend, I go to the cinema with my friends to watch movie.

✓ While watching movies is one of my hobbies and I watch movies every weekend, I go to the cinema with my friends to watch movies.

The word 'hobby' should be pluralized to 'hobbies' because it refers to one of multiple interests. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' when referring to multiple instances or general activities. Using singular forms here is incorrect because the context implies multiple movies and hobbies.

× I'm very big fan of Bollywood movies.

✓ I'm a very big fan of Bollywood movies.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very big fan'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Without 'a', the sentence is grammatically incorrect.

× And uh, recently I discovered some horror movies as well from Hollywood and I'm looking forward to watch more horror movies.

✓ And uh, recently I discovered some horror movies as well from Hollywood and I'm looking forward to watching more horror movies.

The phrase 'looking forward to' is followed by a gerund (-ing form) rather than the base verb. Therefore, 'to watch' should be corrected to 'to watching'.

× Well, I prefer to watch movies at the cinema because I think, uh, the vibe of cinema is different and I really like to eat popcorn and watching it.

✓ Well, I prefer to watch movies at the cinema because I think, uh, the vibe of cinema is different and I really like to eat popcorn while watching it.

The phrase 'and watching it' is incorrect because it lacks a proper conjunction or preposition. Using 'while' correctly connects the two actions happening simultaneously.

× The big screen feels different. It can't be like this experience can't be you get at home.

✓ The big screen feels different. You can't get this kind of experience at home.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. The corrected sentence clarifies the meaning and uses proper sentence structure to express that the experience at the cinema is unique compared to home.