Movies— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors such as missing articles and incorrect verb forms. Try to be more concise and correct in grammar, and avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice.

例: I usually watch movies every night on weekdays to relieve stress, especially after a long day at work.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be improved by using more precise vocabulary and correcting grammar. For example, use 'relaxed and refreshed' instead of 'relaxing and refresh'. Also, avoid vague phrases like 'and so on' by giving a couple of specific examples.

例: I usually enjoy romantic movies like La La Land and Little Women because they help me feel relaxed and refreshed.

提案: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and unclear expressions. For example, 'watch movie' should be 'watch movies', and 'It's refreshed' is incorrect. Try to use linking words to connect ideas and be more specific about why you prefer watching at home.

例: I prefer watching movies at home because I can relax on the couch with my cat and enjoy the big screen from my projector, which makes the experience more comfortable.

提案: Your answer is too short and contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases such as 'speaking like like I always'. Try to provide more specific reasons and examples, and use correct grammar.

例: Yes, watching movies in other languages is very useful because it helps improve vocabulary, pronunciation, and listening skills. For instance, I often watch foreign films to practice my language abilities.

× On the weekdays, I enjoy watching movie every night to help me drive the stress away.

✓ On the weekdays, I enjoy watching movies every night to help me drive the stress away.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to multiple instances of watching movies every night, not just one movie.

× After a long week of work, I prefer watch movie.

✓ After a long week of work, I prefer watching movies.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by the gerund form 'watching' instead of the base form 'watch'. Also, 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to indicate general activity.

× After a long week of work, I prefer watch movie.

✓ After a long week of work, I prefer watching movies.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to the general activity of watching movies, not a single movie.

× Well, I'd like to watch romantic movies such as La La Land, Little Woman and so on.

✓ Well, I'd like to watch romantic movies such as La La Land, Little Women and so on.

The movie title 'Little Woman' is incorrect; the correct title is 'Little Women' which is plural.

× It makes me feel relaxing and refresh.

✓ It makes me feel relaxed and refreshed.

The adjectives 'relaxing' and 'refresh' are incorrectly used to describe feelings. The correct adjectives are 'relaxed' and 'refreshed' to describe how the person feels.

× Well, I'd like to watch movie at home.

✓ Well, I'd like to watch movies at home.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' because it refers to the general activity of watching movies at home.

× I enjoy watching movie with my projector and sinking into the couch with my Kitty.

✓ I enjoy watching movies with my projector and sinking into the couch with my kitty.

The noun 'movie' should be plural 'movies' to indicate the general activity. Also, 'Kitty' should be lowercase 'kitty' unless it is a proper noun.

× It's refreshed.

✓ It feels refreshing.

'It's refreshed' is incorrect because 'refreshed' is a past participle and does not describe the state of 'it'. 'It feels refreshing' correctly describes the feeling.

× It's useful to watch movies to help people improve their language skill and speaking like like I always.

✓ It's useful to watch movies to help people improve their language skills and speaking, like I always do.

'Skill' should be plural 'skills' to refer to multiple language abilities. The phrase 'speaking like like I always' is incorrect; it should be 'speaking, like I always do' to make sense.