E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lặp từ. Hãy cố gắng sử dụng các liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

例: I prefer e-books because I can read them anywhere and anytime using my phone. This makes it very convenient to access information quickly.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

例: I usually read online when I have free time, especially after a long day. I like to read news and interesting articles to relax and learn about the world.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng nhưng cách diễn đạt chưa rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ ý định của mình.

例: Yes, I will read more online in the future because the internet develops quickly. It is easy to access a lot of information and understand current events.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng chính xác và thêm các chi tiết cụ thể để làm rõ sở thích đọc của bạn.

例: I usually read information about the economy, politics, and health care online because the internet provides fast and updated news.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự mạch lạc và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và liên kết các ý với nhau để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn.

例: Reading online is different from paper because I can read anywhere and anytime. It is very convenient and I can access information quickly.

× To be honest, I rephrase is books are because I can read anywhere and anytime I need a phone, I just need a phone.

✓ To be honest, I prefer e-books because I can read anywhere and anytime; I just need a phone.

The original sentence has unclear structure and incorrect word usage ('rephrase is books are'). The corrected sentence clarifies the preference and corrects the sentence structure for better understanding.

× So I think it's so can a convenient to create an is that access information?

✓ So I think it's very convenient to access information.

The original sentence contains incorrect word order and unnecessary words ('so can a convenient to create an is that'). The correction simplifies the sentence and uses the correct adjective 'convenient' with proper structure.

× So when I have free time, are you through with allies? Pictures about A at? I didn't know after a long day, usually written on line to access information about the world or are I think it has made me laugh and escape for PC life.

✓ So when I have free time, I usually browse online to access information about the world. I think it helps me relax and escape from daily life after a long day.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear phrases ('are you through with allies? Pictures about A at?'). The correction restructures the sentence to convey the intended meaning clearly and grammatically.

× Oh yes, because that energy 8 develop and so on. Information about Internet is very fat, so I can access information easily an understand about. A situation of the work.

✓ Oh yes, because technology is developing rapidly. Information on the Internet is very fast, so I can access information easily and understand the situation in the world.

The original sentence has incorrect word usage ('energy 8 develop', 'very fat') and unclear meaning. The correction replaces these with appropriate words and corrects sentence structure.

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✓ I usually read information about situations in the world like churches, economy, politics, culture, and health care because information on the Internet is very fast, so I can access it easily.

The original sentence has multiple singular/plural errors ('reek' instead of 'read', 'politic' instead of 'politics', 'girl or' unclear). The correction fixes plural forms and clarifies the meaning.

× Oh, I think reading online allow me a with anywhere in any time. It is in addition is very convenient to. Because information is very fast, so I can reach easily an easy tree, I chose a.

✓ Oh, I think reading online allows me to read anywhere at any time. In addition, it is very convenient because information is very fast, so I can reach it easily.

The original sentence misuses prepositions ('a with anywhere in any time') and has incomplete phrases. The correction uses correct prepositions ('to read anywhere at any time') and completes the sentence for clarity.