E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，且有些冗余。建议简化句子结构，注意时态一致性，并使用更自然的表达方式。

例: I used to prefer paper books when I was a child because I enjoyed feeling the words directly. However, now I prefer e-books because they are more convenient and portable.

提案: 回答中存在发音和表达错误，句子结构混乱。建议使用简单清晰的句子，避免重复，并正确表达时间频率。

例: I usually read online every night before I go to sleep because I found an interesting novel posted online.

提案: 回答不够连贯，表达含糊。建议明确表达观点，使用连接词使句子更流畅，并注意语法正确。

例: I would like to read more online in the future because it saves money and space. However, I might limit it if my eyes get tired from reading too long.

提案: 回答中词汇使用不准确，句子结构不完整。建议使用正确的词汇和完整句子，并举具体例子丰富内容。

例: I enjoy reading various things online, such as interesting stories, new fairy tales, and exciting scripts adapted into films.

提案: 回答表达不连贯，句子断裂。建议使用连贯的句子，明确比较两者的优缺点，并避免语法错误。

例: Reading online is more convenient because it saves money and space. However, reading paper books allows people to feel the power behind the words more directly.

× Well actually when I was a child I prefer the two choose paper books because I think I could feel the power behind the words directly.

✓ Well actually when I was a child I preferred to choose paper books because I think I could feel the power behind the words directly.

这里描述的是过去的情况，动词应该用过去式。原句中使用了现在时的“prefer”，应改为过去式“preferred”。

× But nowadays I prefer to use e-books because I think it is more confident convenience an I could take it every day.

✓ But nowadays I prefer to use e-books because I think it is more convenient and I can take it every day.

原句中“confident convenience an”是错误的词语搭配，应为“convenient and”。“confident”是形容词，意思是自信的，不适合用来形容“convenience”。另外“an”应为“and”。

× Well actually I almost a radon lion everyday because this days I found an interesting novel which is poster on lion so.

✓ Well actually I almost read online every day because these days I found an interesting novel which is posted online.

原句中“a radon lion”是拼写错误，应为“read online”。“this days”应为“these days”，表示最近这段时间。动词“poster”应为过去分词“posted”，表示小说被发布在网上。

× I will read it every night before I go to sleep, so almost every day I read online.

✓ I will read it every night before I go to sleep, so almost every day I read online.

该句无明显介词错误，保持原句。

× Well I really want to see yes, but I think it depends on my eyes because although it is very convenient for me to read on Lion an it just save a lot of money and space but it my eyes are so tired for too long times reading so it depends on.

✓ Well I really want to say yes, but I think it depends on my eyes because although it is very convenient for me to read online and it just saves a lot of money and space, my eyes get very tired after reading for too long, so it depends.

原句中“want to see yes”应为“want to say yes”。“on Lion an it just save”应为“online and it just saves”，动词需加s以符合第三人称单数。句子结构混乱，需调整使其通顺。

× Well, I think there are many interesting things on Lion that we could read.

✓ Well, I think there are many interesting things online that we could read.

“on Lion”应为“online”，表示“在网上”。“Lion”是拼写错误。

× For example an interesting stories knew fairy tales or even some exciting scripts that adapted into films we could read.

✓ For example, interesting stories, new fairy tales, or even some exciting scripts that are adapted into films we could read.

“an interesting stories”中“an”应去掉，因为“stories”是复数。“knew”应为“new”，表示新的。句子缺少逗号分隔，且“adapted”前应加“are”使其成为被动语态。

× Well, I think reading online is more convenient. It just saves a lot of money and space for today's people. But or reading. On paper also has many advantages.

✓ Well, I think reading online is more convenient. It just saves a lot of money and space for today's people. But reading on paper also has many advantages.

“But or reading. On paper”语序错误，应为“But reading on paper”。

× For example, people could understand are the. Power behind the words directly.

✓ For example, people could understand the power behind the words directly.

原句中“are the.”多余且错误，应删除。使句子完整通顺。