E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it is a bit long and slightly redundant. Try to make your sentences more concise and use linking words to improve coherence. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'you know'.

例: I prefer e-books because they are very convenient. For example, with a smartphone or laptop connected to the Internet, I can access any book I want without carrying heavy paper books.

提案: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid repeating similar ideas like 'stay connected and stay updated'. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

例: I usually read online news in the evening or before bed because it helps me catch up on current events and stay informed about the world.

提案: Your answer has good points but contains some grammar mistakes and filler words like 'you know'. Also, avoid sentence fragments and use linking words to connect ideas logically.

例: Yes, I will read more online in the future because it is convenient and affordable. For instance, I can access online newspapers anytime and anywhere without spending money on paper copies.

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains some awkward phrasing like 'politic events scenes'. Try to use more natural expressions and link your ideas clearly.

例: I like to read about political events and current affairs because I want to stay informed. Additionally, I enjoy articles about health care since I care about maintaining a healthy lifestyle.

提案: Your answer is clear but could be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating similar ideas and use linking words to improve flow.

例: Reading online is different from paper because it is more convenient and cost-effective. For example, I don't need to carry heavy books or spend money on paper copies.

× You just need a smartphone or a laptop with Internet connected and then you can access to any kind of book that you want rather than you know with paper books you have to carry a lot of.

✓ You just need a smartphone or a laptop with Internet connection and then you can access any kind of book that you want rather than, you know, with paper books you have to carry a lot of them.

The phrase 'Internet connected' is incorrect; it should be 'Internet connection' because 'connected' is an adjective or past participle, but here a noun is needed. Also, 'access to' is incorrect; 'access' is a transitive verb and should not be followed by 'to'. Additionally, 'carry a lot of' is incomplete and needs an object like 'them' to be grammatically correct.

× You just need a smartphone or a laptop with Internet connected and then you can access to any kind of book that you want rather than you know with paper books you have to carry a lot of.

✓ You just need a smartphone or a laptop with Internet connection and then you can access any kind of book that you want rather than, you know, with paper books you have to carry a lot of them.

The phrase 'access to any kind of book' is incorrect because 'access' as a verb does not require the preposition 'to'. The correct form is 'access any kind of book'.

× I think reading online is very convenient because. You can access to online newspaper almost everywhere an at anytime you want and also it is a cheap way to stay connected with the current events.

✓ I think reading online is very convenient because you can access online newspapers almost everywhere and at any time you want, and also it is a cheap way to stay connected with current events.

The phrase 'access to online newspaper' is incorrect; 'access' as a verb should not be followed by 'to'. Also, 'an at anytime' should be 'and at any time'. 'Newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' to match the context.

× I think reading online is very convenient because. You can access to online newspaper almost everywhere an at anytime you want and also it is a cheap way to stay connected with the current events.

✓ I think reading online is very convenient because you can access online newspapers almost everywhere and at any time you want, and also it is a cheap way to stay connected with current events.

The word 'newspaper' should be plural 'newspapers' because it refers to multiple sources. Also, 'the current events' should be 'current events' without 'the' because it refers to events in general.

× Well, I like to read about the politic events scenes, I love to stay updated with the current affairs and I'm also very interested in the articles related to health care topics because I'm very concerned and care about my healthy lifestyle.

✓ Well, I like to read about political events and scenes, I love to stay updated on current affairs and I'm also very interested in articles related to health care topics because I'm very concerned about and care for my healthy lifestyle.

The phrase 'stay updated with' should be 'stay updated on'. Also, 'care about my healthy lifestyle' is better expressed as 'care for my healthy lifestyle'. 'Politic' should be 'political'. 'Events scenes' is awkward; better to say 'events and scenes'.

× Well, I like to read about the politic events scenes, I love to stay updated with the current affairs and I'm also very interested in the articles related to health care topics because I'm very concerned and care about my healthy lifestyle.

✓ Well, I like to read about political events and scenes, I love to stay updated on current affairs and I'm also very interested in articles related to health care topics because I'm very concerned about and care for my healthy lifestyle.

The adjective 'politic' is incorrect; the correct form is 'political' to describe events. Also, 'the articles' can be 'articles' without 'the' for general reference.

× I think reading online would give you certain benefits compared to reading from paper because it's very convenient, you don't have to bring a lot of papers with you everywhere and also it is very money saving method of reading because you don't have to buy any paper.

✓ I think reading online would give you certain benefits compared to reading from paper because it's very convenient, you don't have to bring a lot of papers with you everywhere and also it is a very money-saving method of reading because you don't have to buy any paper.

The phrase 'money saving method' should be hyphenated as 'money-saving method' because it is a compound adjective before a noun. Also, 'any paper' is acceptable but 'any papers' might be better to match 'a lot of papers' earlier.