E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，有语法错误，如“paper book is more weight”应为“paper books are heavier”。建议使用更准确的表达，并避免重复。

例: I prefer e-books because they are more portable and convenient, allowing me to read anywhere. However, sometimes I choose paper books when I want to enjoy the tactile feeling of the pages.

提案: 回答中有语法和表达不完整的问题，如句尾未完成。建议回答时注意句子完整，避免重复“or or”，并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I usually read online every day, especially current news and celebrity gossip. Sometimes, I also enjoy reading novels online.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如“moot used to make paper”不明确。建议使用正确的短语和句子结构，表达更清晰。

例: Yes, I believe the future is digital, so I will read more online. It's convenient and environmentally friendly because it saves trees used for making paper. I already have hundreds of books on my device.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和重复，如“some and current news”，以及“a way to unwind and relaxing”应为“a way to unwind and relax”。建议注意语法和词汇搭配。

例: I like reading English materials, current news, and celebrity gossip online. It helps me unwind and relax. Online reading provides easy access to a variety of information.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清，如“get access a variety of reading materials in in every time and everywhere”，以及“some true false information”。建议使用正确的表达和连接词，使句子更连贯。

例: On one hand, online reading is more convenient and portable because you can access various materials anytime and anywhere. However, some information online may be inaccurate, while paper books are usually more authentic and reliable because they are carefully reviewed.

× Well, I'm a big fan of ebooks because I think it is more portable and convenient.

✓ Well, I'm a big fan of ebooks because I think they are more portable and convenient.

这里的主语是复数名词“ebooks”，谓语动词和代词应与之保持一致，使用复数形式“they are”而不是单数“it is”。

× but paper book is more weight.

✓ but paper books are heavier.

“paper book”应为复数形式“paper books”，且“more weight”表达不正确，应该用比较级“heavier”来形容重量更大。

× But if I want to feel the touch of contextual, maybe I will choose paper book.

✓ But if I want to feel the touch of context, maybe I will choose a paper book.

“contextual”是形容词，句中应使用名词“context”；另外，“paper book”前应加不定冠词“a”。

× Whenever it is some current news or or some celebrity gossip, I always read online and sometimes I even read some novels online and.

✓ Whenever there is some current news or some celebrity gossip, I always read online and sometimes I even read some novels online.

“it is”用法不当，表达存在，应该用“There is”结构；句尾多余的“and”应删除。

× Yes, I think future is a digital world and I will read more online and it is convenient and more environmental friendly because you don't have to cut on more trees and moot used to make paper.

✓ Yes, I think the future is a digital world and I will read more online because it is convenient and more environmentally friendly since you don't have to cut down more trees and use wood to make paper.

“future”前应加定冠词“the”；“more environmental friendly”应改为副词形式“more environmentally friendly”；“cut on”错误，应为“cut down”；“moot used to make paper”表达错误，应为“use wood to make paper”。

× I just have hundreds book in the devices.

✓ I just have hundreds of books in the device.

“hundreds”后应加介词“of”，且“book”应为复数“books”；“devices”应为单数“device”或根据上下文调整。

× I like to read online some English material, some and current news and also I enjoy reading some celebrity gossip online.

✓ I like to read some English materials, some current news, and I also enjoy reading some celebrity gossip online.

“material”应为复数“materials”；“some and current news”结构不正确，应去掉“and”并调整顺序。

× It is a way to unwind and relaxing.

✓ It is a way to unwind and relax.

“relaxing”是形容词，句中应使用动词原形“relax”与“unwind”并列。

× You know, I think online is a good way to for me to access a variety of information.

✓ You know, I think online is a good way for me to access a variety of information.

“to for me”中“to”多余，应删除。

× You can get access a variety of reading materials in in every time and everywhere.

✓ You can get access to a variety of reading materials anytime and anywhere.

“get access”后应加介词“to”；“in in every time and everywhere”表达错误，应改为“anytime and anywhere”。

× But maybe there are some true false information, but the paper will more authentic and correct because it should examine.

✓ But maybe there is some true or false information, but the paper is more authentic and correct because it should be examined.

“information”是不可数名词，谓语应使用单数“is”；“true false”应加连词“or”；“will more authentic”缺少动词，应为“is more authentic”；“should examine”应为被动语态“should be examined”。