E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较为自然，但存在重复（"when I when I am reading it"）且表达略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

例: I prefer paper books because holding a physical book gives me a unique tactile experience, and I find it easier to concentrate when reading them.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误（"can scrolling"应为"can scroll"），且表达不够简洁。建议注意动词形式，使用更准确的表达，并适当使用连接词。

例: I usually read online during my free time because social media allows me to scroll through apps and find interesting articles to relax and learn new things.

提案: 回答内容具体且有逻辑，但口语中出现了填充词"Uh"，影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用更自然的连接词。

例: Yes, definitely. I believe that as technology advances, new devices with better screens will protect our eyes, allowing me to read more online comfortably.

提案: 回答开头不清晰（"We're currently on."无意义），且表达重复（"finish my assignments"和"help me finish it"）。建议删除无关内容，简化表达并使用连接词。

例: I like reading novels and educational articles online. The articles help me complete my assignments, while novels provide enjoyable stories.

提案: 回答中有重复句式且表达不够简洁。建议避免重复，使用更流畅的句子，并注意语法准确性。

例: Compared to paper books, reading online allows us to overcome time and space limitations. For example, we can read anywhere, like at a bus station or school, freely.

× Well, compared to ebooks, I'm more inclined to read some paper books because it always brings me a special touching experience when I hold a paper book and also I can immerse myself more effectively when I when I am reading it.

✓ Well, compared to ebooks, I'm more inclined to read paper books because they always bring me a special touching experience when I hold a paper book and also I can immerse myself more effectively when I am reading it.

这里的主语是复数“paper books”，谓语动词和代词也应使用复数形式，因此“it always brings”应改为“they always bring”。

× Well, I frequently read online when I have some spare time because with the proliferation of the social media, I can scrolling through some applications and search for some really good articles to unwind myself and learn more things and resources.

✓ Well, I frequently read online when I have some spare time because with the proliferation of social media, I can scroll through some applications and search for some really good articles to unwind myself and learn more things and resources.

情态动词“can”后应接动词原形，不能用动名词形式“scrolling”。

× Well, I frequently read online when I have some spare time because with the proliferation of the social media, I can scrolling through some applications and search for some really good articles to unwind myself and learn more things and resources.

✓ Well, I frequently read online when I have some spare time because with the proliferation of social media, I can scroll through some applications and search for some really good articles to unwind myself and learn more things and resources.

“social media”作为不可数名词，前面不需要加定冠词“the”。

× We're currently on. I prefer reading some novels as well as some educational articles online because I need to finish my assignments, so I need to read these articles to help me finish it.

✓ We're currently on. I prefer reading some novels as well as some educational articles online because I need to finish my assignments, so I need to read these articles to help me finish them.

“assignments”是复数，指代时应使用复数代词“them”，而不是单数“it”。

× Well, compared to a reading from papers, reading online. Well compared to reading from papers, reading online always provides more opportunity for us to break down the time and space limitations.

✓ Well, compared to reading from paper, reading online always provides more opportunities for us to break down the time and space limitations.

“reading from papers”中的“papers”应改为不可数名词“paper”，表示纸张材料；“more opportunity”应为复数“more opportunities”。