E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不连贯的问题，影响表达的自然流畅。建议注意句子结构，避免断句过短或不完整，同时使用连词使表达更连贯。

例: I prefer paper books because I enjoy the feeling of touching and flipping the pages. Moreover, paper books are easier on my eyes compared to staring at screens for a long time.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不完整且缺少连贯性。建议使用完整句子，注意名词复数形式和介词搭配，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: I usually read online when I need to find academic information, such as articles related to my research field, because it is more convenient to use a computer.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，且句子结构不完整。建议使用更准确的表达，避免重复，并注意拼写错误。

例: Yes, I think I will read more online in the future because technology has developed rapidly. Reading online is more convenient and efficient since you can access information anytime and anywhere, and take notes easily.

提案: 回答中表达不够清晰，句子结构有些混乱。建议调整句子顺序，使用连接词使表达更自然流畅。

例: I especially like to read academic articles online because I can easily highlight important points and take digital notes, which is more convenient and efficient than using printed books.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题，且句子连接不够自然。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和冠词的使用，并用连接词增强连贯性。

例: Reading online is different from reading paper books because you can access many small books and take digital notes. In recent years, many digital applications have helped us read books online, making it more convenient than printed books. However, reading printed books still has a special feeling.

× When I need to read some academic informations like search and read.

✓ When I need to read some academic information like search and read.

information 是不可数名词，不能加复数-s。这里应使用单数形式。

× Because it is more convenient using computer.

✓ Because it is more convenient to use a computer.

动词不定式to use更适合表达目的或原因，且computer前应加冠词a。

× As you can read any information anytime and anywhere, and you can write down noes more.

✓ As you can read any information anytime and anywhere, and you can write down notes more.

notes是复数形式，表示笔记，原文noes拼写错误。

× I like to read study materials on my especially academic articles.

✓ I like to read study materials, especially academic articles.

on my用法错误，且句子结构不通顺，应去掉on my，直接用especially引出重点。

× You can get tiny books you need online and take digital notes.

✓ You can get the tiny books you need online and take digital notes.

tiny books前应加定冠词the，表示特指需要的书籍。

× And recent years, there are also many digital applications help us reading books online.

✓ In recent years, there are also many digital applications that help us read books online.

时间状语应使用介词in，且help后接动词原形read，不能用reading。

× It is more convenient than reading printed books, but reading printed books is a special.

✓ It is more convenient than reading printed books, but reading printed books is special.

special是形容词，前面不需要冠词a。