E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并使用更准确的词汇表达观点。

例: I prefer paper books because they are easier on my eyes. When I read e-books for a long time, the screen light strains my eyes. Also, I like to write notes and underline important content in paper books.

提案: 回答中有语法错误和表达混乱，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，避免无关内容，突出主要观点。

例: I usually read online in the evening after work because it helps me relax. I prefer e-books since they save money and are convenient for my fast reading speed.

提案: 回答较好，但可以通过使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，同时增加具体细节以丰富内容。

例: Yes, I will read more online in the future because it is convenient and provides access to many materials. However, I often get distracted by notifications from apps, which affects my concentration.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子结构有些重复，建议使用连接词使表达更连贯，并注意语法准确。

例: I like reading textbooks online because, as a dental student, my dermatology textbook is very heavy. Therefore, I download digital versions and take notes during my free time.

提案: 回答中有重复词汇，建议注意用词准确，避免重复，并使用更多连接词使表达更自然。

例: There are several differences between reading online and on paper. For example, it is easier to make notes and highlight important points on paper. Additionally, reading online is more affordable and convenient because I can access many materials instantly.

× I usually reading online in the evening after work because I think it is a good way to relax.

✓ I usually read online in the evening after work because I think it is a good way to relax.

这里的主语是“I”，后面应该用动词原形“read”而不是动名词“reading”，因为“usually”表示习惯性动作，需用一般现在时。

× I often read ebooks, I think they are a football and community and it consume me unnecessary money on buying books.

✓ I often read ebooks. I think they are affordable and convenient, and they save me unnecessary money on buying books.

原句中“football and community”是错误的词汇搭配，应为“affordable and convenient”表示“实惠且方便”。另外，“consume me unnecessary money”表达不当，应改为“save me unnecessary money”表示节省不必要的开支。

× sometimes my textbook on dermatology is really a really heavy, so it is not a good choice to carry them to my classrooms.

✓ sometimes my textbook on dermatology is really heavy, so it is not a good choice to carry it to my classrooms.

“textbook”是单数，后面指代应使用单数代词“it”，而不是复数“them”。

× sometimes my textbook on dermatology is really a really heavy, so it is not a good choice to carry them to my classrooms.

✓ sometimes my textbook on dermatology is really heavy, so it is not a good choice to carry it to my classrooms.

“a really heavy”中“a”不应与不可数形容词“heavy”连用，应去掉“a”。

× I like writing in writing some notes and underlying important. Content to make me.

✓ I like writing some notes and underlining important content to help me.

“writing in writing”重复且错误，应为“writing”；“underlying”应为“underlining”，表示“划重点”；“important. Content”中句号错误，应连写为“important content”。

× reading online is more affordable and convenient because I can get access to many materials instantly instantly.

✓ reading online is more affordable and convenient because I can get access to many materials instantly.

“instantly”重复出现，应删除多余的一个。