E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答较自然且内容相关，但可以增加连接词使表达更连贯，同时丰富细节描述，例如说明纸质书的具体优点。

例: I prefer reading paper books because they are easier on my eyes, especially after long hours of screen time. Additionally, the tactile feeling of paper enhances my reading experience, making it more enjoyable and immersive.

提案: 回答直接且内容清晰，但句子结构稍显简单，可以使用连接词使句子更流畅，并补充更多细节。

例: I usually read online in the evening because I am busy studying during the day. Therefore, the evening is my free time to relax and enjoy reading.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但语言稍显重复且缺乏具体细节。建议使用更多连接词并具体说明便利性的原因。

例: Yes, I will read more online in the future because technology is developing rapidly. Moreover, online reading is very convenient since I can access a wide range of materials anytime and anywhere.

提案: 回答内容具体且相关，但可以增加连接词使表达更自然，同时稍微扩展细节。

例: I'm fond of reading art novels and fashion magazines online because they keep me updated on the latest trends and also inspire my creativity in various ways.

提案: 回答表达了观点，但句子结构较简单，建议使用连接词并补充更多具体对比细节。

例: In my opinion, reading online is more convenient and portable than paper books because you can access content anytime and anywhere. However, paper books offer a more comfortable reading experience without screen glare.

× I think more people will choose to read online because it's very convenient in the future.

✓ I think more people will choose to read online because it is very convenient.

句子中“because it's very convenient in the future”中的“in the future”与前面的“will choose”重复表达了未来时间，且“because it is very convenient”已经足够表达原因，去掉“in the future”使句子更简洁自然。

× I usually read online in the evening since I'm busy with studying during the day and so evening is my free time to enjoy reading.

✓ I usually read online in the evening since I'm busy studying during the day, so the evening is my free time to enjoy reading.

“busy with studying”中的“with”多余，正确表达应为“busy studying”。另外，连接词“and so”应拆分为“,”和“so”以使句子结构更清晰。

× Moreover, the tactile feeling of paper enhances my reading feeling.

✓ Moreover, the tactile feeling of paper enhances my reading experience.

“reading feeling”表达不自然，正确用法是“reading experience”，表示阅读体验。

× In my opinion, I think reading online is more convenient and portable than paper books because you can access content anytime and anywhere if you are free.

✓ In my opinion, reading online is more convenient and portable than paper books because you can access content anytime and anywhere when you are free.

“if you are free”在此处表达条件不够准确，改为“when you are free”更符合时间状语的用法。

× I think more people will choose to read online because it's very convenient in the future.

✓ I think more people will choose to read online because it is very convenient in the future.

“it's”是“it is”的缩写，正式写作中应避免缩写，尤其在正式场合，改为完整形式“it is”更合适。