E-books— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应避免语法错误和表达不完整，建议使用完整句子并补充具体细节，例如说明电子书的便携性和种类丰富。

例: I prefer e-books because they are very convenient and easy to carry when I go outside. Moreover, I can access a wide variety of novels and other reading materials anytime.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，建议使用更准确的表达，并具体说明阅读时间和原因。

例: I usually read online after work because it helps me relax. Also, I can learn many new skills and find interesting content in the books I read online.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，建议使用正确时态和句式，并具体说明未来阅读的理由。

例: Yes, I will read more online in the future because it offers many advantages. For example, I can learn new skills from articles and it also helps me relax after a busy day.

提案: 回答表达不够清晰，建议使用准确的词汇和句子结构，具体说明喜欢阅读的内容和原因。

例: I like to read news, interesting articles, and useful skill tutorials online because they help me improve myself and allow me to get information quickly anytime and anywhere.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，建议使用正确的句子结构和连接词，具体比较电子书和纸质书的不同。

例: Reading online is different from paper books in several ways. Firstly, e-books are very convenient to carry when I go outside. Secondly, I can adjust the font size, which makes reading more comfortable.

× I prefer ebooks because I think it is convenient and it is very easy to take out door.

✓ I prefer ebooks because I think they are convenient and they are very easy to take outdoors.

这里的主语是复数形式的“ebooks”，谓语和代词应与之保持一致，使用复数形式“they are”。另外，“out door”应写作一个词“outdoors”，表示户外。

× And using ebook I can read a variety of novels and.

✓ And by using ebooks, I can read a variety of novels.

句子结构不完整，缺少谓语和宾语。应使用介词短语“by using ebooks”引导状语，且句尾不应有多余的“and”。

× I usually read online after work because I think it can make me relax and I can earn many skills on the online and the books has many interesting things.

✓ I usually read online after work because I think it can help me relax and I can learn many skills online, and the books have many interesting things.

“earn many skills”应改为“learn many skills”，表示学习技能；“on the online”应改为“online”，不需要冠词；“the books has”主谓不一致，应改为“the books have”。

× Yes I will because I've been read more online.

✓ Yes, I will because I've been reading more online.

现在完成进行时应使用“have/has been + 现在分词”，这里应为“have been reading”，而不是“have been read”。

× The future will have many advantages, for example I can learnt many new skills from their articles and also help me unwind.

✓ The future will have many advantages; for example, I can learn many new skills from their articles and it also helps me unwind.

“learnt”是过去式，句中应使用一般现在时“learn”表示习惯或事实；“help me unwind”前应加主语“it”，并将动词改为第三人称单数“helps”。

× Oh, I like to read something news and something interesting article and useful skills online because it helped me improve myself and I can catch more information in the short time may in the anytime and anywhere.

✓ Oh, I like to read some news, interesting articles, and useful skills online because they help me improve myself and I can get more information in a short time, maybe anytime and anywhere.

“something news”应改为“some news”，“something interesting article”应改为“interesting articles”，保持数量一致；“it helped me”时态不对，应为现在时“they help me”；“catch more information”表达不自然，改为“get more information”；“may in the anytime and anywhere”表达混乱，改为“maybe anytime and anywhere”。

× Reading online have many different from paper.

✓ Reading online is very different from paper reading.

主语“Reading online”是单数，谓语应使用单数“is”；“have many different”结构错误，应改为“is very different”。

× Second, it also can adjustable font size which made me read more comfortable than.

✓ Second, it also has adjustable font size which makes me read more comfortably.

“can adjustable”错误，应改为“has adjustable”；“made”时态不对，应为一般现在时“makes”；“comfortable”应改为副词“comfortably”修饰动词“read”；句尾“than”无比较对象，应去掉。