Science— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều câu không có nghĩa hoặc không liên quan. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh những câu không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu.

例: No, I don't enjoy studying science at school because I find it difficult and not very interesting compared to other subjects.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu đơn giản và giải thích rõ ràng về việc bạn có sử dụng kiến thức khoa học hay không trong cuộc sống hàng ngày.

例: No, I don't use my science knowledge daily because I am currently studying finance and banking, which is unrelated to science.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích lý do tại sao bạn không muốn học thêm về môn khoa học nào đó hoặc bạn muốn tập trung vào lĩnh vực của mình.

例: Currently, I am not interested in learning more about any science subjects because I want to focus on my major, finance and banking.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý kiến nhưng không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trình bày ý kiến một cách mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích lý do tại sao khoa học quan trọng với mọi người.

例: Yes, I think it is important for everyone to study science because technology is everywhere and understanding science helps us use it better.

提案: Câu trả lời của bạn không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý kiến của bạn khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, nói rõ bạn có thích xem chương trình khoa học không và giải thích lý do.

例: Yes, I like watching science TV programs because they provide interesting information and help me learn new things.

× To be honest, I don't enjoy studying science at school with her.

✓ To be honest, I don't enjoy studying science at school.

The phrase 'with her' is unclear and does not fit the context, causing sentence structure confusion. Removing it clarifies the sentence.

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✓ In my school, the teachers are just strict.

'Church' is incorrect here; likely intended 'teachers'. Also, 'are' agrees with plural 'teachers'. 'Trust' is a typo for 'strict'. Correcting these fixes subject-verb agreement and word choice.

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✓ The curriculum includes many challenging topics to study.

Original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. Rewriting to express intended meaning improves clarity and structure.

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Single word 'Story.' is incomplete and does not form a sentence. It should be removed or expanded to a full sentence.

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✓ Oh no, I don't use science knowledge every day because right now I'm currently working in finance and banking during my vacation.

Missing modal verb 'use' with 'science knowledge' and incorrect phrase 'and vacation'. Adding 'working' clarifies meaning and corrects modal verb usage.

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✓ I studied science, so I have used it in my country and in my life.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting verb tense and sentence structure clarifies meaning.

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✓ To be honest, right now I don't enjoy studying science because I want to focus on my major, which is finance and banking, so I want to develop in my work involving numbers and the economy.

Multiple errors in verb forms, word choice, and sentence structure. Correcting these improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Oh yes, nothing is very important for everyone to study science because right now technology is evil laugh.

✓ Oh yes, it is very important for everyone to study science because right now technology is evolving rapidly.

'Nothing is very important' is incorrect; should be 'it is very important'. 'Evil laugh' is a mishearing or typo for 'evolving'. Correcting adjective use and word choice fixes the sentence.

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✓ So people usually still use scientific knowledge for research and other purposes.

Original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Rewriting improves sentence structure and clarity.

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✓ I do, honestly. I watch science programs on TV every day. I'm very excited about these subjects, so I usually use information from research and news.

Original sentences are fragmented and contain unclear phrases. Correcting sentence structure and word choice improves clarity.