Science— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应更加自然流畅，避免语法错误，如“lack of guidance”应为“lack guidance”。回答内容应更直接，避免冗长。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoyed studying science at school, especially biology, which was my favorite subject. However, I sometimes found the theories difficult to understand due to lack of guidance. Besides classes, I also enjoy watching science fiction movies, which spark my interest further.

提案: 回答应更自然且结构清晰，避免语法错误，如“lack of those knowledge”应为“lack that knowledge”。建议用连接词连接观点，表达更具体。

例: No, I don't apply scientific theories in my daily life. I feel I lack scientific thinking skills like critical or theoretical thinking, which I hope to develop in the future.

提案: 回答时应注意语法和表达的准确性，如“Health and Human bodies”应为“health and human body”。建议使用连接词使句子更流畅，内容更具体。

例: I am most interested in learning more about health and the human body because I want to help myself and those around me stay healthy. This knowledge can help me improve my physical well-being.

提案: 回答内容具体且有例子，但表达稍显口语化，建议用更正式的表达方式，避免重复和语法错误。

例: Yes, I believe everyone should have a basic understanding of science. For example, knowing how to extinguish a fire or escape from a submerged car can be life-saving. Additionally, understanding nutrition helps us make healthier food choices.

提案: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“animal words”应为“animal documentaries”，句子结构不完整。建议简洁明了，使用连接词使表达连贯。

例: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs, especially animal documentaries. They spark my curiosity and creativity, and I feel I learn a lot about the world through them.

× I found the biology class was my favorite subject.

✓ I found the biology class was my favourite subject.

这里没有复数错误，句子正确。

× I think I have interest in science, but sometimes I just lack of guidance so I find it difficult to understand the theory.

✓ I think I have an interest in science, but sometimes I just lack guidance so I find it difficult to understand the theory.

“have interest in”应为“have an interest in”，缺少冠词“an”；“lack of guidance”应为“lack guidance”，动词“lack”后不加介词“of”。

× But I like to watch movies related to science, science fiction, et cetera.

✓ But I like to watch movies related to science, science fiction, etc.

“et cetera”通常缩写为“etc.”，口语中更常用缩写形式。

× Oh I cannot use any theory in science in my daily life.

✓ Oh, I cannot use any scientific theory in my daily life.

“cannot”用法正确，但“any theory in science”表达不自然，改为“any scientific theory”更准确。

× I think I am lack of a science thinking myself.

✓ I think I lack scientific thinking myself.

“am lack of”错误，应直接用“lack”；“a science thinking”错误，thinking不可数，改为“scientific thinking”。

× I really want to cultivate something like critical thinking or theoretical thinking but I can't.

✓ I really want to cultivate something like critical thinking or theoretical thinking, but I can't.

句子结构正确，添加逗号使句子更流畅。

× I lack of those knowledge.

✓ I lack that knowledge.

“lack of”错误，应为“lack”；“knowledge”是不可数名词，不能用“those”，改为“that”。

× When talking about science subject, I found that Health and Human bodies was the ones that I found most curious because I want people around me and myself stay healthy and I want to use this knowledge to keep myself.

✓ When talking about science subjects, I found that Health and Human Bodies were the ones that I found most curious because I want people around me and myself to stay healthy and I want to use this knowledge to keep myself healthy.

“science subject”应为复数“science subjects”；“Human bodies”作为科目名称首字母应大写；“was”应改为复数“were”；“want people... stay”应为“want people... to stay”；“keep myself”后应加形容词“healthy”。

× You know, I want to improve my physical health.

✓ You know, I want to improve my physical health.

句子正确，无需修改。

× Yes, you must have some basic background about science, like for example, how to put off a fire when you're in danger, how to help yourself get out of the car when the car was dropped in the water.

✓ Yes, you must have some basic background in science, like for example, how to put out a fire when you're in danger, how to help yourself get out of the car when the car has fallen into the water.

“background about”应为“background in”；“put off a fire”应为“put out a fire”；“was dropped in the water”时态和表达不准确，改为“has fallen into the water”。

× You have to know something about science, and you need to eat the healthy food, not junk food, not poison yourself, right?

✓ You have to know something about science, and you need to eat healthy food, not junk food, and not poison yourself, right?

“the healthy food”中“the”不必要，改为“eat healthy food”；“not poison yourself”前加“and”使句子更连贯。

× Yes, besides animal words, I find watching science programs most interesting because I found it very curious, makes me feel very creative and imaginative when I am watching those materials and find myself can be more knowledgeable.

✓ Yes, besides animal words, I find watching science programs most interesting because I find it very curious; it makes me feel very creative and imaginative when I am watching those materials and I find I can be more knowledgeable.

“found”时态不一致，改为“find”；“makes me feel”前应加分号或句号分隔；“find myself can be”语法错误，改为“I find I can be”。

× No discover the world's better.

✓ I want to discover the world better.

原句结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，改为完整句子表达意图。