Science— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有重复表达。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和动词形式，使表达更自然流畅。

例: Yes, I enjoy studying science at school because I am a curious person. Discovering the truth about different things satisfies my curiosity, and I like explaining what I learn to others.

提案: 回答中存在词汇错误（bird washing应为bird watching），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用正确词汇，完善句子结构，并提供具体细节。

例: Yes, I use my science knowledge daily because I am enthusiastic about bird watching. I have learned biology, which helps me identify different kinds of birds accurately.

提案: 回答句子断裂，表达不连贯，缺少连词和完整句子。建议合并句子，使用连接词，使表达更连贯具体。

例: I really love biology because I am enthusiastic about animals. Therefore, I want to learn more about them and discover some of their secrets.

提案: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当，句子结构不够清晰。建议使用更准确的表达方式，避免重复，增强逻辑性。

例: Of course, it is important for everyone to study science because without scientific knowledge, people may not solve problems in their lives and might accidentally harm themselves.

提案: 回答中句子断裂，表达不完整，时态使用不当。建议使用完整句子，注意时态一致性，使表达更自然。

例: Yes, I liked watching science TV programs, especially when I was a child. They helped me find the truth or reasons behind various phenomena, which satisfied my curiosity.

× Yes, because I'm really a curious person finding the truth of different kinds of things can fulfill my curiosity.

✓ Yes, because I'm really a curious person. Finding the truth of different kinds of things can fulfill my curiosity.

原句中缺少句号，导致句子结构不完整。应将其拆分为两个完整的句子。

× And I really enjoyed to explain something to others.

✓ And I really enjoy explaining something to others.

动词enjoy后应接动名词形式，不能接不定式to explain。

× Yes, because I'm enthusiastic about bird washing.

✓ Yes, because I'm enthusiastic about bird watching.

bird washing是错误搭配，应为bird watching，表示“观鸟”。

× So I learned about knowledge about biology.

✓ So I learned some knowledge about biology.

knowledge是不可数名词，前面不能用冠词a，应使用some或省略冠词。

× And it really works when I identify different kinds of bird and try.

✓ And it really works when I identify different kinds of birds and try.

bird应使用复数birds，因为前面有different kinds of，表示多种类。

× I really love biology. Because I'm enthusiastic about animals.

✓ I really love biology because I'm enthusiastic about animals.

因为句子因使用句号断开，导致结构不完整，应合并为一个复合句。

× So I really want to know that. Some knowledge about them and finding some secret of.

✓ So I really want to know some knowledge about them and find some secrets about them.

原句断句不当，且动词形式不一致，应调整为连贯句子，且动词形式保持一致。

× Of course, unless people learn more about science, they won't solve more problem on their lives.

✓ Of course, unless people learn more about science, they won't solve more problems in their lives.

problem应使用复数problems，因为表示多个问题；介词on应改为in，表示“在他们的生活中”。

× Or sometime they can do some wrong thing that may do harm to themselves.

✓ Or sometimes they can do some wrong things that may harm themselves.

sometime应为副词sometimes；wrong thing应为复数wrong things；may do harm to应简化为may harm。

× Yes, especially when I was a child. I love to. Find the truth or reason about some phenomenon.

✓ Yes, especially when I was a child. I loved to find the truth or reason about some phenomena.

描述过去时应使用过去时态loved；phenomenon复数形式为phenomena；句中断句不当，应合并。

× That really satisfied my curiosity.

✓ That really satisfied my curiosity.

该句语法正确，无需修改。