Science— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: आपके उत्तर में 'depend depend' जैसा शब्द दोहराव है, जो प्राकृतिक प्रवाह को प्रभावित करता है। उत्तर को और अधिक प्रभावी बनाने के लिए, शब्दों की पुनरावृत्ति से बचें और वाक्यों को संक्षिप्त रखें।

例: Yes, I really enjoyed studying science at school because it helped me understand how the world works. For example, learning about plants and animals increased my appreciation for nature's complexity. Additionally, science gave me practical knowledge that I could apply in daily life, making the subject more interesting.

提案: आपके उत्तर में 'These practical knowledge makes' व्याकरण की त्रुटि है। कृपया संज्ञा और क्रिया के बीच संख्या का मेल सुनिश्चित करें। साथ ही, 'health and nutritions' में 'nutrition' का एकवचन रूप उपयोग करें।

例: Yes, I often use my science knowledge daily because it helps me understand nature and environmental complexities. For example, it enables me to make better decisions about health and nutrition, and provides insights into how everyday technology works. This practical knowledge makes my life easier and more interesting.

提案: आपका उत्तर अच्छा है, लेकिन 'gaining A deeper understanding' में 'A' का उपयोग गलत है। कृपया वाक्यांशों में सही कैपिटलाइज़ेशन और व्याकरण का ध्यान रखें।

例: Yes, I would like to learn more about artificial intelligence because my current job in the science field involves working with advanced technologies. For example, gaining a deeper understanding of AI would help me improve my skills and contribute more effectively to my projects. Moreover, I find AI fascinating because it has the potential to transform many industries and improve everyday life.

提案: आपके उत्तर में 'effect effectively' शब्दों का गलत संयोजन है। कृपया सही शब्दों का चयन करें और वाक्य को सरल और स्पष्ट बनाएं।

例: Science is very important for everyone because it helps us understand the world around us. For example, by studying science, we learn about plants and animals, which enables us to protect the environment effectively. Moreover, this knowledge is useful in many areas of life, such as improving health, advancing technology, and conserving nature for future generations.

提案: आपके उत्तर में अंतिम वाक्य अधूरा लग रहा है। कृपया वाक्य को पूरा करें और विचारों को स्पष्ट रूप से व्यक्त करें।

例: Yes, I really enjoy watching science TV programs because they help me understand important scientific concepts and the importance of nature conservation. For example, I often watch National Geographic and Discovery Channel, which provide fascinating information about wildlife and environmental issues. These programs not only increase my knowledge but also inspire me to care more about protecting the environment.

× For instance, learning about plants and animals depend depend my appreciation for nature and its complexity.

✓ For instance, learning about plants and animals depends on my appreciation for nature and its complexity.

The verb 'depend' should be singular 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'learning'. Also, the phrase should be 'depends on' to be grammatically correct.

× These practical knowledge makes my life easier and more interesting.

✓ This practical knowledge makes my life easier and more interesting.

The noun 'knowledge' is uncountable and singular, so it should be preceded by 'this' instead of 'these' and the verb 'makes' is correct.

× For example, gaining A deeper understanding of AI would help me improve my skills and contribute more effectively to my projects.

✓ For example, gaining a deeper understanding of AI would help me improve my skills and contribute more effectively to my projects.

The article 'a' should be lowercase and used before 'deeper' as it is an adjective modifying 'understanding'. Capital 'A' is incorrect here.

× Science is very crucial for everyone because it helps us understand how the world around us.

✓ Science is very crucial for everyone because it helps us understand the world around us.

The phrase 'understand how the world around us' is incomplete; it should be 'understand the world around us' to be correct.

× which enables us to protect the environment effect effectively.

✓ which enables us to protect the environment effectively.

The word 'effect' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'effectively' alone correctly modifies the verb 'protect'.

× These programs not only increase my knowledge but also inspire me to care more about protecting.

✓ These programs not only increase my knowledge but also inspire me to care more about protecting the environment.

The sentence is incomplete; 'protecting' needs an object to complete the meaning, such as 'the environment'.