Science— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Answer wa eigo no shizen-sa ga tarinai desu. 'I do have an technical and analytic mind' wa grammatikku teki ni machigatte imasu. Motto shizen de, tadashii bunpou de kotaeru koto ga taisetsu desu. Mata, 'one of the favorite student of those two' no imi ga fumei desu. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

例: Yes, I enjoyed studying science at school because I have a technical and analytical mind. I found it easier than many of my peers, and I was often praised by my teachers for my understanding.

提案: Kotae ga fumei de, bunpou no machigai mo arimasu. 'I mostly used science knowledge' wa ima no jikan to awanai desu. Motto meikaku ni, rikai shita koto o setsumei shite kudasai. Riron to jissen o musubu koto ga taisetsu desu.

例: Not really. I mainly use my science knowledge to better understand my school lectures. However, I sometimes apply basic scientific principles in daily activities, such as cooking or solving problems.

提案: Kotae ga fumei de, imi ga wakarimasen. 'crab Stone force' to iu kotoba wa machigatte iru kamo shiremasen. Motto meikaku ni, tokutei no kagaku no kamoku o shoukai shite, naze sore ni kyoumi ga aru ka setsumei shite kudasai.

例: Yes, I would like to learn more about the concept of force, which is fundamental in physics. It is important because it explains how vehicles move and how rockets launch into space.

提案: Kotae wa rikai dekimasu ga, bunpou to eigo no shizen-sa o koujou saseru hitsuyou ga arimasu. 'perform it with convenient' wa fumei desu. Motto meikaku ni setsumei shite kudasai.

例: Yes, it is important for everyone to learn basic science because it helps in many areas of life, such as cooking and manual work, making tasks easier and more efficient.

提案: Kotae ga fumei de, bunpou no machigai ga ooku, imi ga tsukimazui desu. 'it is kills' wa imi ga wakarimasen. Motto shizen de, rikai shi yasui eigo de kotaete kudasai.

例: Yes, I enjoy watching science TV programs because they explain concepts visually, which makes them easier to understand. This helps improve my knowledge and skills for both school and daily life.

× Yes, I enjoyed studying science in my school.

✓ Yes, I enjoy studying science at my school.

The question is in present tense asking about current enjoyment, so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Enjoyed' is past tense, which does not match the question's context.

× I do have an technical and analytic mind so I find it quite easy as compared to other my peers and I was one of the favorite student of those two.

✓ I do have a technical and analytic mind, so I find it quite easy compared to my other peers, and I was one of the favorite students of those two.

'An' is used before vowel sounds, but 'technical' starts with a consonant sound, so 'a' is correct. 'Other my peers' is incorrect; it should be 'my other peers'. 'Favorite student' should be plural 'students' because it refers to one among multiple students.

× Not really, I mostly used science knowledge.

✓ Not really, I mostly use science knowledge.

The question is about daily use, so present tense 'use' is appropriate instead of past tense 'used'.

× I came to better understanding my lecture at school.

✓ I came to a better understanding of my lectures at school.

The phrase needs the article 'a' before 'better understanding' and the preposition 'of' after it to be grammatically correct.

× I find that many scientific concepts are not very practical in everyday life, but if I think carefully, I do apply some basic principle occasionally, like when I'm cooking or solving.

✓ I find that many scientific concepts are not very practical in everyday life, but if I think carefully, I do apply some basic principles occasionally, like when I'm cooking or solving problems.

'Principle' should be plural 'principles' to match 'some'. The verb 'solving' needs an object, so 'problems' is added for clarity.

× Yeah, I like to know a lot of about the crab Stone force, which is one of the key and the basic for a living and every every forces and every vehicle and even the sky rockers use this concept to gain.

✓ Yeah, I would like to know a lot about the crab stone force, which is one of the key and basic forces for living. Every force, every vehicle, and even rockets use this concept to gain advantage.

'A lot of about' is incorrect; it should be 'a lot about'. 'Crab Stone force' seems to be a mishearing or typo; assuming 'crab stone force' is intended as a concept, it should be clarified. 'Every every forces' is repetitive and incorrect; corrected to 'every force'. 'Sky rockers' is likely 'rockets'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammar.

× Yes, it is very necessary for everyone to know the basic about the fundamental science.

✓ Yes, it is very necessary for everyone to know the basics of fundamental science.

'The basic' should be plural 'basics' without 'the' to generalize. 'About the fundamental science' should be 'of fundamental science' for correct preposition use.

× It is because they can apply them to any field such as cooking and even some labor work.

✓ It is because they can apply it to any field such as cooking and even some labor work.

'Them' refers to plural, but 'basics' is singular in concept here, so 'it' is more appropriate.

× They can perform it with convenient.

✓ They can perform it conveniently.

'Convenient' is an adjective; the adverb form 'conveniently' is needed to modify the verb 'perform'.

× Yeah, I do enjoy watching science TV programs.

✓ Yes, I do enjoy watching science TV programs.

'Yeah' is informal; 'Yes' is more appropriate in formal speaking tests.

× It is because I can get a lot of in premise who is who is it's pretty easy to comprehends through the visual and eventually it is kills.

✓ It is because I can get a lot of information, which is pretty easy to comprehend through visuals, and eventually it improves my skills.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'In premise who is who is' is nonsensical; replaced with 'information'. 'Comprehends' should be 'comprehend' to match 'easy to'. 'It is kills' is incorrect; replaced with 'it improves my skills' for meaning.

× It increase my skills and will be beneficial for my academic as well as life purpose.

✓ It increases my skills and will be beneficial for my academic as well as life purposes.

'Increase' should be 'increases' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Purpose' should be plural 'purposes' to generalize.