Internet— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且内容丰富，但可以增加一些连接词使句子更连贯，例如使用“because”或“so”。

例: I started using the Internet when I was around 12 years old because it was mainly for school research and playing simple online games. Since then, it has become an essential part of my daily life for learning and communication with friends.

提案: 回答清晰且具体，建议在句子间使用更多连接词如“such as”或“for instance”来增强逻辑性。

例: I usually go online several times a day to check messages, browse social media, and stay updated with the news. For instance, I often use my phone during breaks to quickly catch up on messages or read articles.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子稍显冗长，建议简化句子结构并使用连接词如“therefore”使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, I remember when my parents limited my screen time because they thought it would distract me from studies. Therefore, I was only allowed to use the Internet for educational purposes, such as researching for school assignments, and I spent more time reading books.

提案: 回答自然且结构合理，建议在表达原因时使用更多连接词如“because”来增强逻辑。

例: Yes, I think I spend a lot of time online because I often scroll through short videos or chat with friends, which can take up several hours each day. However, I try to balance this by setting daily time limits.

提案: 回答内容具体，但句子结构不够完整，建议补充完整句子并使用连接词如“which makes”使表达更连贯。

例: Without the Internet, I would probably rely heavily on traditional methods of communication and information gathering, such as reading books, newspapers, or having face-to-face conversations with people, which makes accessing up-to-date information quite time-consuming.

× they only allowed me to go online for educational purpose, such as researching for school assignment.

✓ they only allowed me to go online for educational purposes, such as researching for school assignments.

“purpose”和“assignment”在这里需要用复数形式，因为表示多种用途和多项作业。应使用复数形式“purposes”和“assignments”。

× Because of this restriction, I often spend more time reading books.

✓ Because of this restriction, I often spent more time reading books.

句子描述的是过去的情况，动词时态应与上下文保持一致，使用过去时“spent”。

× Without the Internet I would probably have to rely heavily on traditional methods of communication and information gathering such as reading books, newspapers or have face to face conversations with people.

✓ Without the Internet, I would probably have to rely heavily on traditional methods of communication and information gathering such as reading books, newspapers, or having face-to-face conversations with people.

“or have face to face conversations”结构不一致，应改为“or having face-to-face conversations”，保持与前面动名词形式一致。同时“face to face”应加连字符。

× This would be quite time consuming because accessing up to date information.

✓ This would be quite time-consuming because accessing up-to-date information would take longer.

原句缺少谓语动词，导致句子结构不完整。应补充谓语使句子完整，同时“time consuming”和“up to date”应加连字符。